copy pasted from the first part that has kicks, there aren't kicks here so change the pattern
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ln ends too early, elongate this ln to the 1/1
this is diabolical lmao (just a comment)
i would remove this note to give some tension to the vocal pause, it's too flowy as it is
31795|2 i would remove this note too for the same reason although ignoring this reply is justified
i don't see why you would ignore the vocal here while it's still more dominant
intentionally omitted for the build to pre chorus i like it how it is now, the vocal is just not dumped, the adlib is ignored
the pause isn't justified imo and would flow better if you just represent it with a continues 1/8, something like
i like it a lot more with the pause
suggest to add a note here at 1/8 col 4 just to represent the continous vocal, the pause feels just a tiny bit abrupt to me
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copy pasted from the first part that has kicks, there aren't kicks here so change the pattern
marked as an issue
ln ends too early, elongate this ln to the 1/1
this is diabolical lmao (just a comment)
i would remove this note to give some tension to the vocal pause, it's too flowy as it is
31795|2 i would remove this note too for the same reason although ignoring this reply is justified
i don't see why you would ignore the vocal here while it's still more dominant
intentionally omitted for the build to pre chorus i like it how it is now, the vocal is just not dumped, the adlib is ignored
the pause isn't justified imo and would flow better if you just represent it with a continues 1/8, something like

i like it a lot more with the pause
suggest to add a note here at 1/8 col 4 just to represent the continous vocal, the pause feels just a tiny bit abrupt to me
14357