MoeChakkaFire
issey
Source:
MoeChakkaFire
Tags:
弌誠, モエチャッカファイア, jpop, male vocal, japanese, jp, zenless zone zero, zzz, mihoyo, hoyoverse, ellen joe, dump, streams, jacks, bursts, fentflinger44
BPM:
163
Length:
2:32
Passes/Fails:
0 / 1
this is waaaay too hard, take notice from what you did the first half of the chorus since it just repeats here
while the pause at the start of the chorus is justified because of the crash cymbal, this one is not and it fucks with the flow of the chorus, so like you could add a note to make a jack or something, anything can work
this vocal ends at the next 1/4 so make it end there, there are so many instances of vocals ending too early or too late, they're starting point is not represented well or is too early/too late i'm geniunely going to stop pointing them out
gg :wilted_rose: (i hope its better now)
the vocal starts at the latter 1/3 so this is too early, repattern it to be correct please
this is too short the vocal ends at 1/2 and even then having it a jack doesn't work imo change it to 1/6 dumpstream
this jack literally represents nothing
even if it's for the bass you shouldn't make it a jack
my fault i was being schizo
i suggest you make this a jack for the vocal + melody
/bass
21444|3 same thing
this vocal starts at 1/3 so i suggest doing something visual like https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/861882146175713290/1440442542049984727/image.png?ex=691e2c28&is=691cdaa8&hm=ade9f2ad1e7b26321a27f7cc6dbfea2351b96f3fdbfb27506c3cf46a77826818&
i'm going to kill discord
yeah discord sucks buddy
you copy pasted this so it completely ignored the marimba melody, please represent it here as you did previously
brah
you copy pasted this so it completely ignored the marimba melody, please represent it here as you did previously
okay gurt
there's that marimba roll that happens at places like 10861|4,10907|3 but is ignored
represent it and everytime it repeats please
14911|2,15003|2 here too
im like deaf so idk but maybe did it
i also don't see what this jack is representing either, i gave it a pass at the intro cuz i thought it was for the crash cymbal and i suggest you make it stay that way, but if you don't agree then remove the minijack here and everytime it repeats entirely and have the minijacks only on the marimba or whatever the melody there is
oka it doestn go into jack now
this is jack, then the next measure 9389|2 it's not. what's going on here? what's this jack representing?
idk