The Experiment feat. GUMI
Steampianist feat. Shye
Source:
n/a
Tags:
english, vocaloid, trap, electronic, geometry dash, gd, geometrydash, gdtriaxis, triaxis, グミ, megpoid voicebank, v4, vocaloid4, four, megumi nakajima, 中島愛, handstream, hs, light, dump
BPM:
145
Length:
3:29
Passes/Fails:
329 / 339
this should a hand for the kick drum
add a note here and 167190 here too because that's where the synth actually ends, what you have right now ends too early
the synth does restart twice at 1/2 here but representing it as 2 sole notes is very underwhelming to the intensity of the section, what i would suggest is doing something like this where the 3 note rolls repeat instead of a single note https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/861882146175713290/1436399117164089455/image.png?ex=690f766c&is=690e24ec&hm=f8183cb4d6db414bf4d6d4166f73468819f7a9913ea97cf366b620abcc8208aa&
164500|1,164706|1 same thing here
169465|3,169672|3 : 171120|2,171327|2 same thing here also
the synth restart doesn't happen here but at the next 1/4 line so i suggest doing something like https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/861882146175713290/1436398417835331666/image.png?ex=690f75c5&is=690e2445&hm=c87ceecc0046ee3aab382e329333bf7ae55f1cf859c597d1ae2245c1ccb68360&
i suggest you make this a full roll and mirror the roll after it, in the end it should look like this https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/861882146175713290/1436397825062604890/image.png?ex=690f7538&is=690e23b8&hm=91f4eefe0b3b1994eabc9c2d62cabbec0927f61d2871f2da942b0f0146e18c33&
since this synth is more intense than previously putting a 1/4 trill there doesn't do it justice, and it would be underwhelming. i would suggest dumping it more heavily or using 1/5 trills like this https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/861882146175713290/1436397374594355210/image.png?ex=690f74cd&is=690e234d&hm=f5806d2e87ef24d7e63a36c4836ab96c7f9afc7341e6662c3c5fcb1aed873d19&
166155 same thing applies here
this little section is inconsistent with 148776 because the same sound repeats here it should have the same mapping so try something like this https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/861882146175713290/1436392162882359507/image.png?ex=690f6ff2&is=690e1e72&hm=cc22fee6911acddbe142853e67c5494b9c4adb1b4748235e56f52e1c34f9bcac&
158707 same thing here, try something similar to the screenshot
suggest to make these 2 notes jumps like this https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/861882146175713290/1436391264852643850/image.png?ex=690f6f1c&is=690e1d9c&hm=9292281a9eaea8afcbae983ad767e2f59a6483e155060f1395de3ad7232a6caa&
for the slightly hidden kick drums there
204844|2,205051|3 same thing here
suggest to add 1/2 lns for the hi-hat rolls that happen here and everytime it repeats
200086|3 same thing at the end
for the sake of consistency this shouldn't be a minijack because it isn't on the sound you represent as a hand every 4/1
39741|3 same thing here
93328 the song repeats here so make sure to apply it here too
this is poor patterning, i advise you to not have three or more jumps back to back in jumpstream/handstream without having a reason to do so, this is the exact opposite. try doing something like https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/861882146175713290/1436388258270412851/image.png?ex=690f6c4f&is=690e1acf&hm=3034f923b47405a4f65b2ee9244814f380a92a2061a86b11c9c7dd5c99c0678b&
113120 drop repeats here and it seems copy pasted so feel free to delete it and copy paste it again, same thing for the third drop
extremely long anchor that seems accidental and doesn't seem to represent anything, repattern this section as to remove that anchor and make sure to not make another accidental anchor whilst fixing this one
118775|3,118982|3,119189|3,119396|3,119603|3,119810|3,120017|3,120224|3,120431|3,120637|3,120844|3 same thing
131396|3,131603|3,131810|3,132017|3,132224|3,132431|3,132637|3,132844|3,133051|3 same thing
this should be a hand for the kick drum
55258|3,55258|4 : 61879|3,61879|1 : 68500|3,68500|4 : 73465|2,73465|1 same thing applies for these
make sure to apply this for the repeated drops too
now in the drop i'm stuggling to understand your usage of hands in the handstream, because most of the time they are on the kicks and snares but here for example 48637|2,48637|1 there is not a hand where it should be. going forward, i'm going to assume that the hands are on kicks and snares while the "we are you" vocal is special and should also be represented as hands. if you disagree or i'm wrong feel free to dm me @ discord #jindax
i think this lead into the drop is too hard, and leads into an uncomfortably fast one hand trill. you could try something like this with lns https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/861882146175713290/1436382564230107197/image.png?ex=690f6702&is=690e1582&hm=0de15b6bac40743b9fc86ef75062534caccbd765969ead1b0201858a18610ae7&
sometimes simple is the way to go
112775|1,112844|2,112913|4,112982|1,113051|3,113120|2 song repeats here so make sure to apply it here too
172362 this also applies here so do something like this https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/861882146175713290/1436399744715853994/image.png?ex=690f7702&is=690e2582&hm=66c668ddf8e77e92e92ad1308a66d3309c0c595965489a2b3405543a95f9657c&
and a note here anywhere but column 2 for the kick drum there
111535 same thing anywhere but column 1
I personally cannot hear anything past the 4th note, not at 45328 or 111535
in this section i suggest you map the drums in the background because without it that section would be bland and would not lead into the drop as heavily as it should, what i'm trying to say is that it's underwhelming for the song's intensity. try something like this https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/861882146175713290/1436381282602057798/image.png?ex=690f65d0&is=690e1450&hm=3e7f71e40604d1fe40e6943a86d14c8c94e874dcf315eb75598bd61caa50e7d0&
and repeat
93328 the song repeats here so make sure to apply it here too
At 00:30.017, I do not hear a drum. I am pretty sure that there is no need for a beat there besides the normal piano.
I do agree with the background drums, however.