suck my 401k (Cut Ver.)
Jarrod Alonge

Created by: Woahwoahweewaa
Submitted: 11 days ago
Last updated: 2 days ago
Source: Beating A Dead Horse
Tags:
rock, metal, screamo, gutteral vocals, chordjack, jack, RGZN, Hellebore, VioletFlower
BPM: 140
Length: 3:08
Passes/Fails: 0 / 1

[4K] 39.18 - Chat what the flip is this guy blab...

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netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

could ctrl+h to alleviate anchor on col 3


Woahwoahweewaa
Creator
2 days ago

I just swapped 63621|2,63728|3 since mirroring that would create other anchors I don't wanna deal with and I figured it doesn't effect anything else

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netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

missing note?


Woahwoahweewaa
Creator
2 days ago

Did not even notice there was a sound there LMAO

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netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

i feel like you could just join these as an anchor to represent the continuous vocal here

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netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

i feel like the missing 1/4 up until 32015 makes the section feel a bit empty because its really intense here, would just fill in the missing 1/4 with singles to represent the vocal


Woahwoahweewaa
Creator
2 days ago

As I agree I actually don't know a good way of doing that without it feeling like I'm charting to nothing.

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netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

i dont feel like the sound here is that intense to justify this diffspike, albeit short.

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netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

i suggest move to col 2 cus the two three note anchors here feel a bit unjustified considering you made only one three note anchor at 29228|1,29335|1,29443|1

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netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

this sound is fairly distinct guitar, could make triple

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netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

how about moving this to col4 to keep consistent with the motif at 22585|4,22693|3,22693|4,22907|4,23014|3,23014|4

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netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

could make these jack cus they are consecutive vocal and dont have must distinction between the two, they sound fairly similar

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netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

could move to col 4 to alleviate the left hand bias here

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netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

could make these triples for the riser sound


Woahwoahweewaa
Creator
2 days ago

I like the idea of 14121|3,14121|2,14121|1 being a triple but I feel like 14.14 is still a tad early for the sound and create a anchor that I don't think is justified.

Woahwoahweewaa
Creator
2 days ago

The rising sound really doesn't come in until 14.08 so adding it to the 8th doesn't make a whole lotta sense

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netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

imo i think you can reserve the quads here for the snare. although this is intense, i think this is less intense than the snare sound so a triple would be more fitting


netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

19693|1,19693|2,19693|3,19693|4

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netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

could be tripe for the ride drum sound thing


Woahwoahweewaa
Creator
2 days ago

I don't really like the idea of this being a hand for contrast with the loud drums right after, feels like it enters too early and the sound just doesn't sound loud enough to justify it.

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netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

could be double because there is no vocal here and is a bit less intense than the other vocal cus the intensity is decreasing


netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

3193|2,3193|4

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netzoid
Ranking Supervisor
3 days ago

could be triple to differentiate this more intense sound than 85|4,85|3