you could totally justify making these jumps with everything that's going on at that time
would add more intensity to the change in music, but if you wanna keep the pattern consistent throughout it can stay like that
you could add notes to both 30834 and 31152 to represent the ticking sound that's going on in the background
this is completely optional but would fill some of the gap that the song leaves
youre missing jumps on these notes, you represent the many sounds as a jump earlier with 37062|4,37062|1 but dont seem to follow up this directly after - I'd add them to get the patterns a bit more depth
you could totally justify making these jumps with everything that's going on at that time
would add more intensity to the change in music, but if you wanna keep the pattern consistent throughout it can stay like that
similar sections
68516|2
73425|3 (ish i guess? not completely the same)
you could add notes to both 30834 and 31152 to represent the ticking sound that's going on in the background
this is completely optional but would fill some of the gap that the song leaves
youre missing jumps on these notes, you represent the many sounds as a jump earlier with 37062|4,37062|1 but dont seem to follow up this directly after - I'd add them to get the patterns a bit more depth
missing set of notes here, the sound you represent with the graces plays here as well