i'd suggest you to delete this jump entirely, since there's no piano only that ringing reverb after the 1/4 note. at least that's what i hear. i'd be okay with leaving one note there too if you disagree, i think that's a good compromise.
here in the second part/repeatition of the main chorus, there's these jumps at 39773|4,39773|3, 44573|2,44573|1 and so on that are not represented in the first part, i thought that was intentional until it didn't happen at 139223, so make them singles to stay consistent.
can you give clarification on why this melody repeatition is represented here but at places like 10973 is ignored? although i'd suggest you to keep it consistent all the way through and either represent that repeat, or ignore it.
111323 115823 116123 177023 181823 182123
Since your intention was to have 2 notes for the 2 piano sounds, you've missed the ones above but you somehow didnt miss the sound at 111623
82523 and 87323 too
honestly feels weird not having to press any notes at the 1/4 snaps when you can clearly hear pianos/drums there.
would be more consistent with 92123 and the rest too
Long anchors on the right hand
98423 here too
Maybe rearrange them
i'd suggest you to delete this jump entirely, since there's no piano only that ringing reverb after the 1/4 note. at least that's what i hear. i'd be okay with leaving one note there too if you disagree, i think that's a good compromise.
good point, made it one note
here in the second part/repeatition of the main chorus, there's these jumps at 39773|4,39773|3, 44573|2,44573|1 and so on that are not represented in the first part, i thought that was intentional until it didn't happen at 139223, so make them singles to stay consistent.
can you give clarification on why this melody repeatition is represented here but at places like 10973 is ignored? although i'd suggest you to keep it consistent all the way through and either represent that repeat, or ignore it.
unintentional, fixed