I like this section, I think it generally fits the music really well because it's the climax of the song and you mapped it as the most dense part as well. But any hi-hat sounds like what is here you could think about maybe making LN's or jacks.
Maybe think about making this build-up section just a single LN to lead in with a small sv change to build it up. I think that would have more impact rather than having a manip stream.
This section has a possibility for creativity. You're mapping hi-hat sounds the same as non hi-hat sounds.
Some ideas:
Make hi-hats LN's (this fits the precedent that you're setting in the rest of the map)
Or you can map the hi-hat sounds as jacks (which is what I would prefer to play)
Also, you could remove the singles that don't represent a hi-hat sound but that wouldn't make sense with how you mapped the previous parts of the map.
You have jump LN's on these notes even though there's no distinct noise that would warrant it. However, in places like 4024|1,4024|2,4024|4 you don't have jump LN's even though the music would warrant something like that.
Move this LN to where 182965|1,182965|2 are
Remove this note
Fast hi-hat starts here so the 1/8 stream should start there too
I like this section, I think it generally fits the music really well because it's the climax of the song and you mapped it as the most dense part as well. But any hi-hat sounds like what is here you could think about maybe making LN's or jacks.
I think my version could fit the vocal better, so I hold back :)
Same thing as 45936|2, just make it a full jumptrill into a jack on the hand
Maybe think about making this build-up section just a single LN to lead in with a small sv change to build it up. I think that would have more impact rather than having a manip stream.
This is a hand even though the other notes that represent the same noise are all jumps
This section has a possibility for creativity. You're mapping hi-hat sounds the same as non hi-hat sounds.
Some ideas:
Make hi-hats LN's (this fits the precedent that you're setting in the rest of the map)
Or you can map the hi-hat sounds as jacks (which is what I would prefer to play)
Also, you could remove the singles that don't represent a hi-hat sound but that wouldn't make sense with how you mapped the previous parts of the map.
Missing a sound here. Maybe put a single in column 3 on 47700 and make the hand after a 1|2|4.
This note has the same musical intention as the next note so make 45936|2 a jump as well.
When the vocals come in you semi follow them but have extra jumps in places like here. Maybe think about only having jumps on the vocals.
You have jump LN's on these notes even though there's no distinct noise that would warrant it. However, in places like 4024|1,4024|2,4024|4 you don't have jump LN's even though the music would warrant something like that.