Rock It
Hommarju

Created by: ReXxGReMoRY
Submitted: over 4 years ago
Ranked: almost 4 years ago
Source: beatmania IIDX 23 copula
Tags:
Electronic
BPM: 170
Length: 1:56
Passes/Fails: 3387 / 7104

[4K] 19.59 - Insane

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PianoLuigi
User
almost 4 years ago

the LN releases and note placements dont really match what's happening in the song, I'd recommend reworking the structure here too. Here's one way to layer it: https://imgur.com/a/fxBGjor


ReXxGReMoRY
Creator
almost 4 years ago

fixed

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PianoLuigi
User
almost 4 years ago

the chord sizes of these LNs don't really match anything in the music, I'd recommend reworking the structure here a bit


ReXxGReMoRY
Creator
almost 4 years ago

fixed

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PianoLuigi
User
almost 4 years ago

this shouldn't be a jumptrill yet, as there is no sound here


ReXxGReMoRY
Creator
almost 4 years ago

fixed

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PianoLuigi
User
almost 4 years ago

You should use the same structure here as you use at 00:20.081 (after taking the following issue into account: https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/21927/mods#mod_1525 )


PianoLuigi
User
almost 4 years ago

110434|3,110434|4,110610|1,110610|2 applies here as well

ReXxGReMoRY
Creator
almost 4 years ago

fixed

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PianoLuigi
User
almost 4 years ago

I recommend extending these LNs to the next beat and ending them with a 2 note chord, to emphasize the strong crash sound at the start of the calmer stream section


ReXxGReMoRY
Creator
almost 4 years ago

fixed

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Suggestion
PianoLuigi
User
almost 4 years ago

You should use the same structure here as you use at 00:20.081 (after taking the following issue into account: https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/21927/mods#mod_1525 )


PianoLuigi
User
almost 4 years ago

Sorry the first timestamp shouldn't be there, the part this mod is referring to is at 53963|3,53963|4,54140|1,54140|2,54316|3,54316|4

ReXxGReMoRY
Creator
almost 4 years ago

fixed i think

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PianoLuigi
User
almost 4 years ago

I want to make sure that you have intentionally chosen that the 2 note chords are on off-beats instead of kicks, where they are everywhere else in the map. I'd recommend moving 2 note chords to main beats here as well.


ReXxGReMoRY
Creator
almost 4 years ago

fixed

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Suggestion
PianoLuigi
User
almost 4 years ago

this LN structure is pretty interesting, especially the way the LN releases of the notes in 1st and 2nd column are staggered. I'd suggest moving the LN releases from 1st and 2nd column to 00:45.581


ReXxGReMoRY
Creator
almost 4 years ago

fixed i think

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Suggestion
PianoLuigi
User
almost 4 years ago

You should use the same structure here as you use at 00:20.081 (after taking the following issue into account: https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/21927/mods#mod_1525 )


ReXxGReMoRY
Creator
almost 4 years ago

fixed

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PianoLuigi
User
almost 4 years ago

Suggest extending this LN to end at the next beat, as releasing 1/4 early for no clear reason is pretty awkward


ReXxGReMoRY
Creator
almost 4 years ago

fixed

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Suggestion
PianoLuigi
User
almost 4 years ago

The LN endpoint at 00:20.346 should have 2 note chord as the "burst" ends there and returns to normal snare hits


ReXxGReMoRY
Creator
almost 4 years ago

fixed

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PianoLuigi
User
almost 4 years ago

This should be 2 note chord, as you've used these small jumptrills to other similar parts.


ReXxGReMoRY
Creator
almost 4 years ago

fixed

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Issue
aya
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

89258 has a kick sound which you followed in 89346|4,89346|3,89434|2,89434|1,89522|3,89522|4 and other parts. Same for 20082, 21493.


ReXxGReMoRY
Creator
almost 4 years ago

i think its fixed

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Issue
aya
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

ReXxGReMoRY
Creator
almost 4 years ago

fixed

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Issue
aya
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

Insane difficulty doesn't have tags.


ReXxGReMoRY
Creator
almost 4 years ago

fixed