Shooting Star (Al Storm Remix)
Bang!
Source:
Shooting Star / Love, Life & Happiness (Remixes)
Tags:
Dance Dance Revolution Hard Techno 24/7 Hardcore DDR
BPM:
174
Length:
2:33
Passes/Fails:
6480 / 2706
Title should be: Shooting Star (Al Storm Remix), so with a lowercase L instead of an i. Also this Remix is not from DDR so the source should be Shooting Star / Love, Life & Happiness (Remixes). The original Song is from DDR so you can keep Dance Dance Revolution in the tags if you want. Map is off by -15 ms so add 15 ms in "Edit" "Apply Offset to Map". Also your Beat line is off by one full beat so change that too please. I would advice you to delete the notes on the first 5 beats so the player can get into the bpm of the map and does not have to play the first note visually only. 27769 would put a note on column 2 here. 34148 you are using triple notes randomly here. try to stick to the pattern (either only jumps on the kicks or triple notes on every other beat). 44148 from here on its better. 78286|2,78630|3,78975|4,79320|1 all these should be half a beat later. Same goes for these: 83803|2,84148|3,84492|2 . Thus 84837|4 should be deleted. 101992|3,102165|3,102337|2,102510|1,102682|1 need to be 1/4 beat earlier (eventho it may sound a little bit late there that is just the vocal part and its not that huge of a delay that you would hear the difference). 103717|2 same here. Again i would put a note here: 121562 . Change this one to a single note since its not a kick like the ones before: 120699|2,120699|3 . Same as above here: 121562 . Missing triple note here: 127941 . Last but not least, from here on: 132424 i would make the lns you end on half beats longer like these: 132423|4 but that is just personal preference since i think it plays better.
There were some points I didn't agree with. but with the ones I did, I changed them. Thank you for the mod!
It would be advantageous to know what exactly you did not want to change so we can discuss about in here. I will check out the map rn.
Okay so as far as i can see:
you did not change the beat line (it is still one beat late), look at 22094 for example. The song starts with a new part there so the beat line should also be at this point. As i mentioned for 34148 i still think the triples at 34163 and at 36922 are placed without context, maybe explain to me why you did not use jumps there. 78301|2,78645|3,78990|4,79335|1 i still require the vocals here to be on the beat the belong (in this case halfbeat), so please move those half a beat further. 83818|2,84163|3,84507|2 same for these. You placed a note here: 121576|1 and here 121576|1 but not here: 27784 . Please stick to one of the patterns. Still a missing Triple note here: 127956 if you disagree with me please explain why you only placed 2 notes there.