You mapped all of the grace notes in that section of the song except for this one. 17096|3 and 32096|1 do not have the kick which is represented by jumps in these sections. 17096|3,20143|4 this note isn't the same as the other ones in the longjack, so it should ideally be on a different column (I suggest the third one). I would also recommend changing the patterning so this 44869|1,44986|1,45104|1,45221|1 doesn't happen, preferably by moving the first shlong to the second column. You also missed the sound in between these two 46979|2,47096|2. Instead of these two 48912|2,48971|4 please add three notes in 1/6 as you did before to these same sounds. These 50611|3,50729|3,50846|3 and these 52486|4,52604|4 are also in 1/6, please remember to use lower playbacks in sounds which are harder to hear. The piano roll ends before these 76451|1,76510|4,76568|2 notes representing it. For playability I recommend moving 87525|3,87643|3 to the second column (currently there are 2 jacks and a roll on one hand). 92565|4,92623|3,92682|2,92740|1 1/6. I'm pretty sure this 99127|3,99127|4 should be a single note. 104986|4,105045|3,105104|2,105162|1 1/6. 117877|1,117936|2,117994|3,118053|4 1/6. There's also a 1/6 drumroll in between these two 119518|4,119752|4. I can't hear anything that these 130533|3,130592|2,130650|4,130709|1,130768|2,130826|3,130885|4 would represent, the violin roll ends before those come through. 134518|3 should probably be a single note. 147526|2,147644|2 same playability issue as before, kind of a little spike. I would ctrl+H those 150455|4,150533|3,150611|2,150690|1 for pitch relevance.
The map is also mistimed by 10ms and has 15 unsnapped notes. All of the issues are minor, putting on hold.
You mapped all of the grace notes in that section of the song except for this one. 17096|3 and 32096|1 do not have the kick which is represented by jumps in these sections. 17096|3,20143|4 this note isn't the same as the other ones in the longjack, so it should ideally be on a different column (I suggest the third one). I would also recommend changing the patterning so this 44869|1,44986|1,45104|1,45221|1 doesn't happen, preferably by moving the first shlong to the second column. You also missed the sound in between these two 46979|2,47096|2. Instead of these two 48912|2,48971|4 please add three notes in 1/6 as you did before to these same sounds. These 50611|3,50729|3,50846|3 and these 52486|4,52604|4 are also in 1/6, please remember to use lower playbacks in sounds which are harder to hear. The piano roll ends before these 76451|1,76510|4,76568|2 notes representing it. For playability I recommend moving 87525|3,87643|3 to the second column (currently there are 2 jacks and a roll on one hand). 92565|4,92623|3,92682|2,92740|1 1/6. I'm pretty sure this 99127|3,99127|4 should be a single note. 104986|4,105045|3,105104|2,105162|1 1/6. 117877|1,117936|2,117994|3,118053|4 1/6. There's also a 1/6 drumroll in between these two 119518|4,119752|4. I can't hear anything that these 130533|3,130592|2,130650|4,130709|1,130768|2,130826|3,130885|4 would represent, the violin roll ends before those come through. 134518|3 should probably be a single note. 147526|2,147644|2 same playability issue as before, kind of a little spike. I would ctrl+H those 150455|4,150533|3,150611|2,150690|1 for pitch relevance.
The map is also mistimed by 10ms and has 15 unsnapped notes. All of the issues are minor, putting on hold.