Same as https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/23689/mods#mod_2206 but more critical, there's literally no order on the jacks placement, now we have jacks of 5 without any reason and some jacks of 4. Reconsider this pattern and rearrange it, because at gameplay it feels like this is not actually following the music
Why this LN is shorter than 332278|2 since the duration of the guitar is the same? also this 332713|3 is doing a jack, you can rearrange that for evade that kind of patterns here
you know what, i THINK this was an initial layering pattern i accidentally left in while trying to find the rhythm. i'm guessing i just took a break or got distracted, saw notes were down and assumed i was done. i'm going to fix these to be more consistent with the previous section of notes.
i'm going to take your words spin them around and change the chart. this is a necessary jack and is a FANTASTIC idea to use along with the guitar. i'm going to go add this to the rest of the section.
These are the only notes who are not making a jack of two notes with an LN above (Reference: 202170|4,202333|4, 200865|1,201028|1 and all this section: 203474), you can rearrange that notes.
the jack doesn't exist because there are 3 places to put an LN there and 1 of them isn't a jack. there isn't some special reason to have the LN anywhere so i think this more varied approach is better.
The LNs has their own rhythm so, its not necessary to move them to make a jack of two LNs
the single notes don't have a structured way on the map so, you can move them for make the pattern more coherent with your proposal (like 188148 is jack of two - Jack of two - jack of three, same on 189452 but with a twist on 189779, 190757 is jack of three - jack of two… well the coherence of the pattern just broke here, that's what i mean).
I don't see a reason to make this change. There isn't some sound that has 3 notes on those beats and would just be pattern for patterns sake. if anything an anchor of 5 for the guitar would make sense but i'm not really interested in doing that.
I get why you wanna remove it, but its a calm section and not even that hard. With the nature of the LNs in this section, i'd rather keep it than remove it.
Same as https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/23689/mods#mod_2206 but more critical, there's literally no order on the jacks placement, now we have jacks of 5 without any reason and some jacks of 4. Reconsider this pattern and rearrange it, because at gameplay it feels like this is not actually following the music
i've removed some of the more egregious jacks
This note is extra here following nothing, you can delete this
reworked the section.
This should be on 397598 and this 397659|4 should be on 397639 at 1/32 snap
i think the first note is fine where it is, but i'll move up the 2nd.
The piano is on 1/24 and ends on 392115, rearrange and add more notes here
The piano ends here. Delete that note
Why this LN is shorter than 332278|2 since the duration of the guitar is the same? also this 332713|3 is doing a jack, you can rearrange that for evade that kind of patterns here
looks like i mistook the drum for the guitar.
Make that LN shorter, you lost the focus here
You can swap this pattern for not overwhelm the right hand
you know what, i THINK this was an initial layering pattern i accidentally left in while trying to find the rhythm. i'm guessing i just took a break or got distracted, saw notes were down and assumed i was done. i'm going to fix these to be more consistent with the previous section of notes.
This is the only pattern that is not doing a jack (Reference: 311246|1,311409|1, 311898|1,312061|1, etc)
Missing note (Reference: 315893|2,315893|4)
Same as https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/23689/mods#mod_2215
This got the same purpose as 306110|3,306110|4,306192|1,306192|2 and 305458|3,305458|4,305539|1,305539|2, consider adding one note on 306762
Move them to 304371 and don't change the snap, the drum sound is there with a 1/8 placement but also on 1/6 snap
304371
i really wish we could edit comments…
https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/23689/mods#mod_2211
Move this to 304018, Drum Sound
https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/23689/mods#mod_2211
You can move this to 303800 and add one on 303855 for follow the drum
https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/23689/mods#mod_2211
There's no battery sound here, remove
Correction: 304602|3 should go on 304615 and remove 304669|4
Correction 2… damn: Ignore this
i'm just going to rechart the entire section to be more accurate, and a bit colorful.
This should be at 1/6 snap instead of 1/8
Missed note here (Reference: 267224|3,267306|2,267306|4,267387|1,267387|3)
Move to the second column, its doing an unnecessary jack with 264126|3
i'm going to take your words spin them around and change the chart. this is a necessary jack and is a FANTASTIC idea to use along with the guitar. i'm going to go add this to the rest of the section.
i'm gonna take that as a win XD
These are the only notes who are not making a jack of two notes with an LN above (Reference: 202170|4,202333|4, 200865|1,201028|1 and all this section: 203474), you can rearrange that notes.
the jack doesn't exist because there are 3 places to put an LN there and 1 of them isn't a jack. there isn't some special reason to have the LN anywhere so i think this more varied approach is better.
Since you did a jack of three notes here and on 189779|1,189942|1,190105|1, why not here 194996|2,194996|3,194996|4 because:
I don't see a reason to make this change. There isn't some sound that has 3 notes on those beats and would just be pattern for patterns sake. if anything an anchor of 5 for the guitar would make sense but i'm not really interested in doing that.
To the fourth column
https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/23689/mods#mod_2201
To the fourth column
https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/23689/mods#mod_2201
To the third column
https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/23689/mods#mod_2201
Move to the second column, same as https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/23689/mods#mod_2201
https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/23689/mods#mod_2201
You can move this for evade the jack with 149832|2
to the first column… i forgot to write that
I get why you wanna remove it, but its a calm section and not even that hard. With the nature of the LNs in this section, i'd rather keep it than remove it.
You missed a double here (Reference: 95213|2,95213|3) (drum, voice)
This should be on 58365 and 58909|1 should be on 58855, the change is more noticeable on that points
i think 58365 is a bit early for the first note, but i did move it earlier. I think the 2nd one can be a bit earlier than that even.
This should start on 40268, the voice change is remarkable on that point.
This feels more correct if you move this LN to 33175 and make 32727|1 longer.
i've moved it back a bit farther.
The voice starts changing on 32197
The voice starts changing on 21253, bring it back here
i'll move it a bit earlier, but that is too far back.