Death Of A Strawberry
Dance Gavin Dance
Source:
Instant Gratification
Tags:
Rock Indie Alternative
BPM:
125
Length:
4:07
Passes/Fails:
7803 / 2923
This section looks like a mess:
224354|1,224354|2,224474|2,224474|1,224594|4,224594|3,224714|3,224714|4,224834|2,224834|1 is the only jack on the entire pattern, then you did streams representing the same sounds on 228194 which is strange, next you ignored the drums on 232034.
This 226394|3,226634|1 are not following anything on the song and 233834 you completely ignored the drum again.
Time to rearrange this section.
I dunno? Maybe it's fixed?
Since this is a copypasted pattern, apply the same mod as https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/26811/mods#mod_2770 and rearrange some patterns for make them different of 46274 (maintaining the structure of course)
Same as https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/26811/mods#mod_2768, more LNs emphasizing the guitar
Note without representation of the guitar, delete
These notes are not representing the guitar so, you can delete these notes
This is double but 132914|2 is single, check the entire section and add/delete if its necessary because is the same problem as the start
I think i did it?
Different guitar sound here, do the same as https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/26811/mods#mod_2771
Here we have a different guitar sound so, this spot belongs to a short LN, which means you have to make 123914|1 start on 124034 and make it shorter
This is actually different of 102074 without any reason and 109154 is different of 101474, the pattern of above got the same problem so… why?
Also you forgot a note (or notes) on 113114, i suggest to rearrange that patterns and choose if map all with jacks or all with streams.
1 - Variety, I guess? Seems a bit boring to play the exact same pattern when i feel like it still gets the point across, changed for consistency tho
2 - I think i changed this before even looking at your mod, i guess check again and lemme know?
Same as https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/26811/mods#mod_2768 but adding an LN here and making 76514|1 shorter
This sounds like you should add an LN on 73034 and make 72914|2 end on 73034 because we have rhythm at the guitar
Did you forgot a double? (references: 41474|3,41474|1, 40754|2,40754|4)
You can add a note here for double
This feels like you could add another note here for drum or cymbal since the LN is for the transition of the pattern.
Changed quite a bit of this section without even seeing this comment so not sure what to make of this now.
Here we have a double when its supposed to be single (Reference: 21554, 25394|1)
You can erase this note OR you can add more notes as doubles following the references.
Another reference: 29234|3
Went with the latter.
You missed a double here? (reference: 17954|2,17954|1, 19874|1,19874|2).
Add one more note
This note is not following anything represented on the song so, you can remove this
Misplaced notes, these should go on 16874