Twinkle Heart
Jun
Source:
n/a
Tags:
J-Pop
BPM:
185
Length:
1:44
Passes/Fails:
56 / 40
This jacks doesn't make any sense with the music, if you try to follow the voice, make a jack during a change on the voice tone, making it during a maintained tone of voice makes it weird to play (for example: 99438|4,99601|4,99763|2,99925|2 is well placed because the tone is different on every spot where you put a jack). check the patterns and fix.
again, why 1/3?
Sudden change of density when the music says "go on" (no change of pitch), make that more dense and follow something because i should suppose here that 79817|4 is a drum and the rest synth, which means it lacks of density
The normal notes are not following anything here, you can clearly hear a sound on 64574 and no sound on 64898|4. Also the LNs are totally random there, consider following the voice.
Here you suddenly stop to following the voice… reconsider check all the section because i actually can't understand the purpose anymore, sometimes you follow the drums + voice and sometimes you follow just the voice.
No voice changing here, erase one note
No voice changing here, erase one note
There's not voice here, you can add a note on 48357 at the fourth column and erase 48682|1, and no, you are not following the drum because 49979|4 is single, watch out there.
These are the same on pitch and purpose, make 40087|1 a double instead of single
Why every stream on this map is on 1/3? if you don't want to overwhelm the player on 1/4, you can erase the doubles and rearrange all to 1/4
You put a single here, but 26952|4,26952|1 is double, add or erase
What makes that patterns different? make both doubles or single
You forgot a note here
for the intensity of the synth, add a note here, 4411, 7006 and 9601