Animal Land (Short Ver.)
Camellia ft. Nanahira

Created by: AkiriMusic
Submitted: over 3 years ago
Ranked: about 3 years ago
Source: n/a
Tags:
Animal, Kawaii, Electronic
BPM: 150
Length: 1:39
Passes/Fails: 3630 / 2048

[4K] 6.36 - Woof! (Normal)

Accepted
Suggestion
Vysion
User
about 3 years ago

Hello, Akiri. I, the user with online alias Vysion, have recently discovered your musical interpretation of the audio piece, "Animal Land", composed by Camellia, with the vocals performed by Nanahira. I believe that this song is quite well made and brings the talents of two wonderful creators together to bring out the best of both worlds, but I digress. Today, I will be critiquing your interpretation thoroughly using the conveniently manufactured criticism panel, located in the top-right of my display.

I must begin by saying that keeping this interpretation easy was a risky, but nonetheless appreciating, move. As you know, rhythm games are known for being notoriously difficult. One could even say that they are the hardest form of video game genre available today, and as it has been since the release of beatmania in 1998. Our community has been known for only the most challenging levels. I am sure you've already seen quite a few examples. Creating your interpretation with easy visibility in mind is a relaxing breath of fresh air from otherwise difficult interpretations which are truly the most unforgiving landscapes. It allows us to enjoy the musical piece without having to fret over whether we have enough stamina or not to complete an interpretation through to its end. Although it may receive less exposure, it is, without a doubt, a pleasing view on Animal Land.

Now, I would like to direct your attention to the caveat in this map, which I have highlighted along with this dialogue box you see before you. At this time within your interpretation, you have placed an elongated note upon which the user must hold until the end of the bar reaches the timing line. This form can represent a variety of musical cues, such as riffs, vocals, and more. I assume you have went with the vocal path, as it is held over the voice of Nanahira. However, this is quite a peculiar section I have highlighted, as the extended note only reaches a partial way before the next timing line. I find it rather odd that this is the case, since the voice of Nanahira extends beyond the end of this extension. To be precise, it extends approximately two (2) times as the note you currently have placed in your map. Fixing this, would be quite easy. Simply open the program, move your cursor to your interpretation, press down with your middle finger on the right-most side of the box, and click "Edit". Now, on your key board, press Control and the letter "G". All you must do now is type "36910|1" and click the Green Pill Button. Place your cursor upon the end of this note extension, and while holding the left-most side of the mouse with your index finger, hold and "drag" the ending to the next white line above.

Overall, I must say that your map certainly meets my standards and I believe with enough time, our elders will have the necessary time and energy to review your interpretation. Until then, I believe the only advice I have for you at this moment is to drink approximately 2 litres of water per day, maintain a regular sleep schedule, and ensure that you do not forget to take a walk every now and then.


哈Ak我(使用在線別名Vysion的用戶)最近發現了您對由油茶組成的音頻作品“動物之地”的音樂解釋,以及Nanahira演唱的聲音。我相信這首歌的製作精良,匯集了兩位出色創作者的才華,展現了兩全其美的感覺,但我離題了。今天,我將使用顯示器右上方的便捷製作的批評面板來全面地批評您的解釋。

我必須首先說,保持這種解釋容易是有風險的,但是仍然令人讚賞。如您所知,節奏遊戲眾所周知非常困難。甚至可以說,它們是當今最困難的視頻遊戲類型,就像1998年Beatmania發行以來一樣。我們的社區僅以最具挑戰性的水平著稱。我相信您已經看過很多例子。輕鬆理解就可以創建您的解說詞,這是來自其他困難解譯(實際上是最無情的景觀)的輕鬆呼吸。它使我們可以欣賞音樂作品,而不必擔心我們是否有足夠的耐力來完成對音樂的詮釋。儘管它可能會受到較少的曝光,但是毫無疑問,它對動物界的看法令人愉悅。

現在,我想將您的注意力轉移到此地圖中的警告中,我已經在您面前看到的對話框以及該對話框中進行了突出顯示。此時,在您的解釋範圍內,您已經放置了一個細長的音符,用戶必須按住該音符,直到小節的末尾到達定時線為止。這種形式可以代表各種音樂提示,例如即興演奏,人聲等等。我想你已經走過了人聲之路,因為那是在Nanahira的聲音之下。但是,這是我特別強調的部分,因為擴展音符僅在下一個定時線之前到達部分距離。我覺得這很奇怪,因為Nanahira的聲音已經超出了擴展的範圍。確切地說,它是當前放置在地圖中的註釋的大約兩(2)倍。解決這個問題將非常容易。只需打開該程序,將光標移至您的解釋上,用中指按下該框的最右側,然後單擊“編輯”。現在,在鍵盤上,按Control鍵和字母“ G”。您現在所要做的就是鍵入“ 36910 | 1”,然後單擊“綠色藥丸”按鈕。將光標放在該註釋擴展名的末尾,然後用食指按住鼠標的最左側,同時按住並“拖曳”末尾到上方的下一條白線。

總的來說,我必須說您的地圖肯定符合我的標準,並且我相信只要有足夠的時間,我們的長輩就會有必要的時間和精力來審查您的解釋。在那之前,我認為目前唯一的建議就是每天喝大約2升水,保持規律的睡眠時間,並確保您不要忘記時不時地散步。


kusa
Developer
about 3 years ago

Thank you Vysion, very cool.

ERA Akiri
Creator
about 3 years ago

Very nice, thank you for your input.