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Created by: SimpleGrain
Submitted: almost 4 years ago
Ranked: about 3 years ago
Source: Cytus
Tags:
Renaissance Prayer, Video Game Music, Classical
BPM: 152
Length: 3:02
Passes/Fails: 3050 / 2309

[4K] 24.01 - Deliverance

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Ping
User
about 3 years ago

patterns for 138624 - until 147703 is very all over the place imo.

There's not really much suggestions I can give for this part sadly, as apart from the fact that you are using 1/3 for the piano and 1/2 for the drums or similar percussion sounds I have no idea what's going on with the patterning…

Also, things like 140597 although when I play it is fine for me, is still a very odd choice since the piano is also pretty much a large focus of the part.

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Ping
User
about 3 years ago

this sudden change in snappings, imo, should also be made clear with patterning as to aid players that closed the color snapping option when playing.

https://i.imgur.com/9M5UGCj.jpg - here's what I would do (changing hands is quite enough to help distinguish imo), feel free to adapt it.

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Ping
User
about 3 years ago

My main issues are with the long one-hand trilly parts like the follow:

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peepoopfart
User
about 3 years ago

Overall, map is very inconsistent

Can you explain why in the first half some doubles in the streams were in the blue line rather than it being a 1/1 note? I would recommend looking through the map for inconsistencies, these are the little bit my motivation bothers me to bring up, but I will explain more when you look through the map and fix some inconsistencies I mentioned, and the weird streams


Ping
User
about 3 years ago

I agree with this, the map is very much really messy - many things required changes

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peepoopfart
User
about 3 years ago

Why is there a 3 note jack?

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peepoopfart
User
about 3 years ago

Find it weird how you stopped making doubles for the 1/1 notes, maybe do something like

https://imgur.com/W2IyPag


peepoopfart
User
about 3 years ago

I understand what you were mapping to with the doubles, and I encourage that, maybe try and focus on the kicks like you were earlier?

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peepoopfart
User
about 3 years ago

Should be a double


peepoopfart
User
about 3 years ago

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