part feels very bland atm. could make the note placements different a bit to emphasize the pitch change. smth like this would work well: https://gyazo.com/9e24ddd90f7b6dd5afdac840634e491e
this is in 1/6 btw not in 1/4. remember to apply it in similar parts
this section here could def be improved on how it maps the claps, for the first two measures you could use one handed jumps and then two handed jumps for the last two measures since the synth's pitch goes higher
if the suggestion is too vague then just dm me on disc so i can explain it better
also applies to similar parts
the bias in [34] creates a one handed trill which feels out of place considering this is the only instance where you use a one handed 4-note trill
could probably move 37538|3 to col 1 as a solution
should put a 2/1 LN here to be consistent with how you map the synth like in 16393|4,17839|4,19285|4
i didnt know it wont hyperlink but u get the point
part feels very bland atm. could make the note placements different a bit to emphasize the pitch change. smth like this would work well: https://gyazo.com/9e24ddd90f7b6dd5afdac840634e491e
this is in 1/6 btw not in 1/4. remember to apply it in similar parts
this section here could def be improved on how it maps the claps, for the first two measures you could use one handed jumps and then two handed jumps for the last two measures since the synth's pitch goes higher
if the suggestion is too vague then just dm me on disc so i can explain it better
also applies to similar parts
the bias in [34] creates a one handed trill which feels out of place considering this is the only instance where you use a one handed 4-note trill
could probably move 37538|3 to col 1 as a solution
should put a 2/1 LN here to be consistent with how you map the synth like in 16393|4,17839|4,19285|4
i didnt know it wont hyperlink but u get the point