Tuk Tuk Boshi
Shaman Cure-All
Source:
Groundbreaking -BOF2010 COMPILATION ALBUM- Disc1
Tags:
Electronic
BPM:
148
Length:
8:04
Passes/Fails:
3 / 9
this section feels oversimplified and i think you could do a lot more to accentuate the music here instead of the current pattern that's pretty arbitrary. i get that you want to add a break here which is perfectly fine, but you could fine-tune this a lot more to make it not feel totally random. it will still give the player a break
this isn't 100% necessary for ranking but i do highly recommend it
here 157424 to here 182458 is a simple stream section but i don't really understand why. this feels like it would be perfect for chordjacks, especially considering the rest of the map. you've already added enough breaks that i think you could safely make this chordjacks
the roll bursts in the map are all over the place and below i have a list of all of them with their respective issues
consider nerfing this to a jump 54451|2,54451|1,54451|4
this anchor feels unnecessary 56427|2,56529|2
are these LNs really necessary? it feels like they'd work just fine as rice 59924|2,59974|3,60025|4,60076|1 and 1/8 LNs are pretty annoying to time. same goes here 319383|3,319434|2,319485|1,319535|4
random minijack? 65701|3,65802|3
unnecessary spike, consider removing the jump going into the burst or repattern to not have the anchor 65802|2,65904|2
remove note on 1 67424|4,67424|1
ghost notes 118437|4,118471|3
missing note 144451
missing note 157018
ghost notes 195971|3,196005|1,196039|2
missing note 234856
burst starts 1/4 too late 247728
please don't end the bursts like this 248235|1,248235|2,248235|4. make it end in a single note on 4 and rework the little section after to fit
consider nerfing to jump 313910|3,313910|4,313910|1
unnecessary anchor 315887|3,315988|3
unnecessary anchor 318066|3,318167|3
unnecessary anchor 323285|2,323387|2
unnecessary anchor 325262|3,325363|3
remove this note 326883|4
starts half a beat early 376343
missing note 403471. consider removing the jump to end it with a single note
missing note 481343
i get that the rhythm repeats but this anchor is wayyyyyyyy too long. you can easily keep the anchory concept but splitting up the anchors would be much better
only take care of this if you're keeping the ending after looking at this https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/40464/mods#mod_4694
this patterning is very very very difficult and it seems like you're doing PR with the gaps in the chordjacks, but it doesn't really work in practice. you should really try to nerf anchors like these 185093|1,185194|1,185295|1,185397|1,185498|1,185599|1,185701|1 and you can also get rid of the quads because they make it much harder for you to pattern these sections well. the song representation will still be there without the quads. you don't have to strictly follow the quad=snare concept (like here 190262|4,190262|3,190262|2,190262|1 it's fine to add a quad but it's just during the handgluts it's problematic)
this issue is also present here 188032|1,188032|3,188032|4,188133|1,188133|2,188133|4,188235|3,188235|2,188235|1,188336|4,188336|3,188336|1,188437|4,188437|3,188437|2,188539|1,188539|2,188539|4,188640|3,188640|2,188640|1,188640|4,188741|4,188741|3,188741|1,188843|4,188843|3,188843|2,188944|4,188944|2,188944|1,189045|3,189045|2,189045|1,189147|4,189147|3,189147|2,189248|1,189248|2,189248|4,189349|3,189349|1,189451|4,189451|3,189451|2,189451|1
191072|2,191072|1,191072|3,191072|4,191174|4,191174|1,191275|3,191275|4,191275|1,191376|2,191376|4,191376|1,191478|2,191478|3,191478|4,191579|3,191579|1,191579|4,191681|1,191681|3,191681|2,191782|4,191782|1,191782|2,191883|2,191883|3,191883|4,191883|1,191985|4,191985|3,191985|1,192086|2,192086|3,192086|4,192187|2,192187|1,192187|3,192289|3,192289|4,192289|1,192390|4,192390|2,192390|3,192491|2,192491|4,192491|1,192593|4,192593|3,192694|1,192694|2,192694|3,192694|4 ((((this one has extremely bad balance))))
194518|2,194518|1,194518|4,194620|1,194620|4,194620|3,194721|3,194721|2,194721|1,194822|2,194822|4,194822|1,194924|4,194924|3,194924|2,195025|1,195025|4,195025|3,195126|3,195126|2,195126|1,195126|4,195228|4,195228|1,195228|2,195329|4,195329|3,195431|4,195431|2,195431|1
197762|4,197762|2,197762|1,197863|4,197863|3,197863|1,197964|2,197964|3,197964|4,198066|1,198066|2,198066|4,198167|1,198167|2,198167|3,198268|4,198268|3,198268|1,198370|2,198370|3,198370|4,198370|1,198471|1,198471|2,198471|4,198572|1,198572|2,198572|3,198674|1,198674|3,198674|4,198775|2,198775|3,198775|4,198876|1,198876|2,198876|3,198978|4,198978|3,198978|1,199079|2,199079|4,199181|1,199181|2,199181|3,199181|4
201005|1,201005|3,201005|4,201106|1,201106|2,201106|4,201208|3,201208|2,201208|1,201309|4,201309|3,201309|1,201410|4,201410|3,201410|2,201512|1,201512|2,201512|4,201613|3,201613|2,201613|1,201613|4,201714|4,201714|3,201714|1,201816|4,201816|3,201816|2,201917|4,201917|2,201917|1,202018|3,202018|2,202018|1,202120|4,202120|3,202120|2,202221|1,202221|2,202221|4,202322|3,202322|1,202424|4,202424|3,202424|2,202424|1
204045|2,204045|1,204045|3,204045|4,204147|4,204147|1,204248|3,204248|4,204248|1,204349|2,204349|4,204349|1,204451|2,204451|3,204451|4,204552|3,204552|1,204552|4,204654|1,204654|3,204654|2,204755|4,204755|1,204755|2,204856|2,204856|3,204856|4,204856|1,204958|4,204958|3,204958|1,205059|2,205059|3,205059|4,205160|2,205160|1,205160|3,205262|3,205262|4,205262|1,205363|4,205363|2,205363|3,205464|2,205464|4,205464|1,205566|4,205566|3,205667|1,205667|2,205667|3,205667|4 ((((this one is also really bad))))
207491|2,207491|1,207491|4,207593|1,207593|4,207593|3,207694|3,207694|2,207694|1,207795|2,207795|4,207795|1,207897|4,207897|3,207897|2,207998|1,207998|4,207998|3,208099|3,208099|2,208099|1,208099|4,208201|4,208201|1,208201|2,208302|4,208302|3,208404|4,208404|2,208404|1
an example of a more balanced section would be from here 339045 to here 364991
the chordjack starting here 92559 up until 103910 has absurdly difficult patterning that doesn't fit the music. the difficulty of this part feels uncalled for so i'd suggest nerfing the use of 2 identical jumps in a row to make it easier to avoid anchors
the same issue happens in other places such as here 105532 to here 129552
and here 339045 to here 364586
keep in mind that the issue with two identical jumps in a row is mostly an issue with two-handed ones, so [13], [24], [23], and [14]. [12] and [34] is much easier
starting jumptrill rolls like these with a jump is straight up terrible, i'd highly recommend removing the note on 1
same thing here except it's ending in a jump 92559|4,92559|2. remove the note on 4
i elaborated on this issue in https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/40464/mods#mod_4696
lol i'm an idiot, this is the right link https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/40464/mods#mod_4700
what is this minijack for? it doesn't seem like it's going to anything
also these
15937|3,16039|3
21613|2,21714|2
is there a particular reason why this long part is simple LN stream? it feels out of place compared to other sections where you mapped the same sounds as chordjacks (like here 79586|1,79586|2,79586|4 )
also a personal take: you could make the map better by ending it here 429856 because the last part really drags and adds to how much the whole thing drags in general. ending the map here isn't a requirement, just a suggestion
section starting here has a really unintuitive way of representing pitch. most of the patterning is relatively light but then it kicks up to full on handgluts with quads after the pitch kicks up slightly. it can be a valid approach but it's unjustified with this little pitch change. i'd recommend using pattern changes instead and keeping the density down for the higher pitched parts