to me it sounds like the sound's coming from the right side, and so I'd move this note to the right
maybe move the ln to column 1?
i'd make this a jump
i'm guessing your thought process for this is that it's missing the sound of the melody, but there's a percussion, so use 0+1 notes,
but in my opinion it makes more sense to consistently map the percussion as 2 notes
23456|3
25742|3
28027|3
this is incredibly unnecessary but, move 2nd ln to a column farther to the right to emphasize the difference in pitch
add a note to turn into a hand
to me it sounds like the sound's coming from the right side, and so I'd move this note to the right
maybe move the ln to column 1?
i'd make this a jump
i'm guessing your thought process for this is that it's missing the sound of the melody, but there's a percussion, so use 0+1 notes,
but in my opinion it makes more sense to consistently map the percussion as 2 notes
23456|3
25742|3
28027|3
this is incredibly unnecessary but, move 2nd ln to a column farther to the right to emphasize the difference in pitch
add a note to turn into a hand