Serotonin Diode
BLAERG

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Created by: kziki
Submitted: over 3 years ago
Ranked: over 2 years ago
Source: Everything was Altered
Tags:
jungle, breakcore, drums, dnb, d&b, drum and bass, BLÆRG
BPM: 195
Length: 3:15
Passes/Fails: 1156 / 920

[4K] 26.46 - 5-HT

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Issue
kusa
User
over 2 years ago

timing of notes is a bit off

move all notes later 1/8 beats, move second note in each group later another 1/16 beats

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Suggestion
kusa
User
over 2 years ago

move the end of the long note earlier half a beat

i think most of the LNs before this tried ending on the beat and I don't think having the LN end where it currently is really adds anything significant

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Issue
kusa
User
over 2 years ago

move earlier 1/4 of a beat

the sound that occurs here is pretty much unnoticable compared to the sound at 28068|3

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Suggestion
Lott
User
over 2 years ago

This js pattern is ehhh a bit unrepresentative, I suggest:

  • Double at 141223, 141377, 141838, 141992
  • Single at 141300, 141915
    Can also use 1/2 LN at 141608, this is quite a nitpick tho
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Suggestion
Lott
User
over 2 years ago

Another note can be added on each timestamp to emphasize the cymbal

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Issue
Lott
User
over 2 years ago

Continuous snares so this stream is rather underwhelming (both in musicial terms and in comparision to the map's double usage), can use a trill or a jumptrill. I suggest using jumptrill, if so, move 114165|1 to col 4 and 114531|3 to col 1

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Suggestion
Lott
User
over 2 years ago

(really nitpicky) This double can be switched to col 12 to differ it with 72222 and reduce anchor strain

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Suggestion
Lott
User
over 2 years ago

Another long anchor,

  • 63837|3,63991|3: These can be moved to col 4
  • 64068|2,64068|4,64144|3,64221|2,64221|1,64298|3,64375|4,64375|2,64452|3: I would use single|double|single|double to emphasize the ticks (like 62837 and 63299)
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Suggestion
Lott
User
over 2 years ago

Rather long anchor, can be fixed by flipping 61606|2,61606|1,61760|2,61837|3,61837|4,61914|1,61914|2,61991|3,61991|4,62068|1,62068|2 which can also indicate new drum pattern

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Suggestion
Lott
User
over 2 years ago

Maybe move to col 1 cuz the 6-note anchor seems quite straining for the song's drum pattern

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Suggestion
Lott
User
over 2 years ago

I suggest using trill (or 1/6 burst if you wanna go heavy) cuz the sound here's quite small


kziki
Creator
over 2 years ago

trill feels like a bit too much and 1/6 wouldn't really match i think

kziki
Creator
over 2 years ago

nvm 1/4 trills are cool

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Suggestion
Lott
User
over 2 years ago

Can apply a 1/4 LN for the buzz sound


Lott
User
over 2 years ago

Same with 42376, 57299, 57453

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Issue
Lott
User
over 2 years ago

triple?

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Suggestion
Lott
User
over 2 years ago

Can move to col 4 to avoid the anchor. Ik it's not long, but 30376 sounds quite light so giving anchor strain to it feels rather strange.