Ano Yume wo Nazotte
YOASOBI
Source:
n/a
Tags:
japanese j-pop j pop japan ayase
BPM:
180
Length:
3:58
Passes/Fails:
61 / 187
FIX all :D
thanks for your cooperation, you may resolve this post
this is quite questionable from the music imo, how about this?
could swap LN length for better gameplay
is this intentional? jack is quite uncomfy, moreover it's on same hand (2+2)
i think deleting 185023|1 and make 185023|3 as 1/1 LN would be better indication for sv
and quite match with the vocal
this is quite an old pattern of osumania map, which is "did not reflect well to the music". you could simply do this to keep the pattern relevant for the music
additional reason: current (very long note ones) is conflicting against 182023 stuff (piano mini LN), that's why i suggested that
161690 missed note?
162857 ^
164190 ^
165190, 165523, 167023, 167857, 168190 ^
you might want to cut the size into half so it won't overtake the feeling on 156856|5,156856|3,156856|1,157023|6,157023|4,157023|2,157190|5,157190|7
could shorten by 1/2
222356|7 ^
things like this, you should choose what to map, not all of them "except it has equal or better pattern". currently it doesn't fit with the sound (which is: 1x 1/2 for piano & 7x 1/8 for other sound)
143690|2,143745|3,143856|6,143912|5 ^
i think this is quite poor pattern usage, here's my suggestion
or you could arrange based on your preference
i think this isn't valid guitar, that makes the note should be normal note. but, that will make the concept ugly
solution: 121690|7,121773|5,121856|6 these 3 should have 3/4 long note duration with 121940|7 as short note on col 4
you sure it didn't started on red line?
is this intended jack? i didn't hear same syllable or same vocal (pair of a i u e o thingy), unlike "112190|4,112356|4 as k a k a" & "114356|4,114523|4 as k i m i"
218356|6,218356|2,218523|2,218523|6 same as above
are these LN intended? for vocal & piano, it must be on 99357 btw
consistency stuff, delete one on each highlighted notes (from what i get, you constantly using double for percussion)
eh nvm, just delete 1 on 87523|6,87523|7
88856|6,88856|5 delete 1
97690|6,97690|7,97690|3 delete 1
from my POV (Point Of View), having triple while holding 2 notes are quite hard compared to holding 1 then triple
99023|2,99023|1,99023|3 same as above
108856|5,108856|3 delete 1 or could move somewhere else that in different hand & not making jack
110190|4,110190|5 same as above
212690 same stuff like 108856|5,108856|3
also 214023
would be better if you make it normal note only since there are no piano sound available there (your previous LN focus was on piano if i get it correctly)
Current map is too early (i know it's a convert map from your osu account)
use "Apply Offset To Map" located on "Edit" by 15 (not negative 15)