Can't take my eyes off you (12' Mix)

Jessica Jay

Also i'm sorry for making so many mods, but as a dump you have to be very careful how do you map some sounds because even having the liberty to map a sound as you like, you have to keep doing that; and if you change your mind, it has to be justified in some transition of pattern or something like that. After applying all the mods i think it will be ready to go for ranked c: as you can see i checked it multiple times XD

And as a final mod, this section right here it's the same as 119597|1,119597|2,119597|4,119705|1,119705|2,119814|2,119814|1,119923|2,119923|1,120031|4,120031|1,120031|2,120140|3,120140|4,120249|1,120249|4,120249|2,120357|3,120357|2,120466|1,120466|2,120466|4,120575|1,120575|3,120684|4,120684|1,120684|2 but they are mapped completely different; i would suggest to mimic the style of 120031|4,120031|1,120031|2,120140|3,120140|4,120249|1,120249|4,120249|2,120357|3,120357|2,120466|1,120466|2,120466|4,120575|1,120575|3,120684|4,120684|1,120684|2 to the previous section in 116553|3,116553|1,116553|4,116662|3,116662|4,116770|4,116770|1,116770|2,116879|1,116879|2,116988|4,116988|3,116988|1,117097|3,117097|4,117205|1,117205|2,117205|4 because it gets more balanced and you avoid putting so many 12 12 34 34 patterns

I don't know how to explain it properly, but taking this as an example, i think you'll notice:

114814|1,114814|2,114814|4,114923|2,114923|1,115031|1,115031|4,115031|3,115140|3,115140|4 This it's balanced because half of it is mirrored/focused on the opposite hand

115249|2,115249|1,115249|4,115357|1,115357|2,115466|3,115466|1,115466|4,115575|4,115575|2,115684|1,115684|3,115684|4 Same scenario here, the 2nd half it's focused on the right hand (because of the longjack at the 4th column) so it's balanced

But here 115792|3,115792|1,115901|4,115901|2,116010|1,116010|2,116118|4,116118|3,116118|1,116227|3,116227|4,116336|3,116336|4,116444|2,116444|1 there's nothing like that, right? there's a very light usage of the left hand and after that, you start to overuse the right hand way too much, you need to balance this.

Apply mirror to balance~

Because all this section has the same hand orientation as the other half (i smell the copypasterino), i need to apply the mirrorino to keep the balancerino

The following notes are unsnapped:

10683|2
73183|3

Also, in the editor press F1, uncheck the option "BPM affects SV" and delete all the SVs at the Scroll Velocity Editor, because the map doesn't really have SVs and it's not necessary to keeping those

Maybe a triple here too? still not sure how much do you want to focus on the drums; i'm already aware that the vocals are the protagonist of the map, but i don't know how much are the drums xD

Missing a triple here~

Compare it to 100575|3,100684|1,100792|4,100901|4,100901|3,100901|1,101010|2,101118|4,101118|3,101227|1,101336|2,101336|1,101336|3,101444|4
As you can see, they're completely different, i would suggest to make the 2nd section with the same style as the first one to keep the consistency with the same sounds being mapped (and also it fits better to the song :D)

(First off sorry for breaking like the order of the mods, but i'm checking it for the 2nd time to see in detail the mapping)

I have a question here, this section has no drums and this one 55901|1,55901|2,55901|3,56010|3,56118|2,56118|1,56227|2 it does have it. You're focusing 100% in vocals here? because as a dump i'm not sure if it really does or not D: if that's not the case, this should be an issue because they're mapped as the same sound

You should avoid this double longjack because it kinda breaks the balance you made with only double taps (i would forgive it because it can represent the vocals, but there's also a lot of the same kind of vocals mapped as only double taps). here's a suggestion to avoid it without affecting the structure:

134270|3 Move it to 4th column
134488|1,134488|4 Move this double to the center (2/3 column)
134597|3 Move this note to 2nd column
134705|2,134705|3 Move this double to 3/4 column
134814|4 Move this note to 3rd column
And there you go ^^

D e l e t e t h i s XD it's way too random comparing it to the rest of the section (it has the same sound as in other sections which you didn't mapped as a longjack, so you'll have to adjust it)

This mini section should have jacks instead of a normal stream D:

Following the structure of the jacks, this longjack shouldn't be here, instead move the first note to 2nd column and the other one to the 1st column