Can't take my eyes off you (12' Mix)
Jessica Jay

Created by: Rem
Submitted: almost 3 years ago
Ranked: almost 3 years ago
Source: n/a
Tags:
Eletronic jack handstream jumpstream
BPM: 138
Length: 2:21
Passes/Fails: 2517 / 1398

[4K] 32.20 - My dear love

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Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

Also i'm sorry for making so many mods, but as a dump you have to be very careful how do you map some sounds because even having the liberty to map a sound as you like, you have to keep doing that; and if you change your mind, it has to be justified in some transition of pattern or something like that. After applying all the mods i think it will be ready to go for ranked c: as you can see i checked it multiple times XD


Punnie
Creator
almost 3 years ago

don't be sorry for that! I am very grateful for the attention on my beatmap and for helping me so much, thank you very much!
Arkener best waifu

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Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

I don't know how to explain it properly, but taking this as an example, i think you'll notice:

114814|1,114814|2,114814|4,114923|2,114923|1,115031|1,115031|4,115031|3,115140|3,115140|4 This it's balanced because half of it is mirrored/focused on the opposite hand

115249|2,115249|1,115249|4,115357|1,115357|2,115466|3,115466|1,115466|4,115575|4,115575|2,115684|1,115684|3,115684|4 Same scenario here, the 2nd half it's focused on the right hand (because of the longjack at the 4th column) so it's balanced

But here 115792|3,115792|1,115901|4,115901|2,116010|1,116010|2,116118|4,116118|3,116118|1,116227|3,116227|4,116336|3,116336|4,116444|2,116444|1 there's nothing like that, right? there's a very light usage of the left hand and after that, you start to overuse the right hand way too much, you need to balance this.

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Issue
Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

The following notes are unsnapped:

10683|2
73183|3


Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

10683|2
73183|3
forgot to link it :<

Punnie
Creator
almost 3 years ago

omg o.o thanks

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Issue
Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

Also, in the editor press F1, uncheck the option "BPM affects SV" and delete all the SVs at the Scroll Velocity Editor, because the map doesn't really have SVs and it's not necessary to keeping those


Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

(Don't forget to add in the tags the genre of the song, in this case it should be Electronic)

Punnie
Creator
almost 3 years ago

Thanks !

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Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

Same scenario as the previous mod, but i want to separate it from the other because it seems that here you did it to represent better the vocals, if that's not the case, do the same thing as the others c:


Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

Same thing at 120684|4,120684|1,120684|2,121118|1,121118|2
Gonna stop it looking at these patterns because i think it's a structure you made and i'm overthinking it too much, not really sure xD *cries in modding dumps

Punnie
Creator
almost 3 years ago

Yea It was for the vocals :v
thanks for pointing this out anyway c:

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Issue
Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

The triple shouldn't be a double and the double a triple?


Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago
Punnie
Creator
almost 3 years ago

this whole section was only for the vocals, so on the first and second one was for vocals only.
I kinda like the vocal focus here instead for the drums

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Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

Maybe a triple here too? still not sure how much do you want to focus on the drums; i'm already aware that the vocals are the protagonist of the map, but i don't know how much are the drums xD


Punnie
Creator
almost 3 years ago

In fact the vocals are the protagonists here :v
I love the vocals focus because you can feel more the cart while playing, so I was avoiding making drums triples.
but on this section I think its okay making this a triple owob

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Issue
Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

Missing a triple here~


Punnie
Creator
almost 3 years ago

thank u owo

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Issue
Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

Compare it to 100575|3,100684|1,100792|4,100901|4,100901|3,100901|1,101010|2,101118|4,101118|3,101227|1,101336|2,101336|1,101336|3,101444|4
As you can see, they're completely different, i would suggest to make the 2nd section with the same style as the first one to keep the consistency with the same sounds being mapped (and also it fits better to the song :D)


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Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

(First off sorry for breaking like the order of the mods, but i'm checking it for the 2nd time to see in detail the mapping)

I have a question here, this section has no drums and this one 55901|1,55901|2,55901|3,56010|3,56118|2,56118|1,56227|2 it does have it. You're focusing 100% in vocals here? because as a dump i'm not sure if it really does or not D: if that's not the case, this should be an issue because they're mapped as the same sound


Punnie
Creator
almost 3 years ago

My mistake I was only focusing vocals, changed

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Issue
Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

You should avoid this double longjack because it kinda breaks the balance you made with only double taps (i would forgive it because it can represent the vocals, but there's also a lot of the same kind of vocals mapped as only double taps). here's a suggestion to avoid it without affecting the structure:

134270|3 Move it to 4th column
134488|1,134488|4 Move this double to the center (2/3 column)
134597|3 Move this note to 2nd column
134705|2,134705|3 Move this double to 3/4 column
134814|4 Move this note to 3rd column
And there you go ^^

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Issue
Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

D e l e t e t h i s XD it's way too random comparing it to the rest of the section (it has the same sound as in other sections which you didn't mapped as a longjack, so you'll have to adjust it)


Punnie
Creator
almost 3 years ago

woops xDD I moved the last 1 2 to right :v

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Issue
Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

This mini section should have jacks instead of a normal stream D:

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Issue
Arkener
User
almost 3 years ago

Following the structure of the jacks, this longjack shouldn't be here, instead move the first note to 2nd column and the other one to the 1st column