Lunar Arrow
mmry
Source:
Dynamix
Tags:
piano trance
BPM:
230
Length:
1:51
Passes/Fails:
2933 / 589
Consider removing these notes to reflect the piano in the background, this stair burst might be a bit too difficult for an Easy due to the BPM so this should cut it down a little.
Ignore this (or don't, your choice), just realized there was a similar burst ( 110738|4) at the ending of the map
You've mapped triple 1/2 notes in this section to kicks, but there are none right here, so this note should be deleted.
Should be a jump
I'd suggest to map this in a 1 2 3 4 pattern, and make the jump [14].
You can also move 53738|1 to column 2 for better pitch relevancy.
I'd map these the same way you'd did for 43955|2 for consistency.
I don't really understand the layering of this, I can see what you were trying to do with the patterns but 68346|4 has just as much impact as the jump before it. Overall I'd personally remove the jumps entirely from this section
Would also like to comment on 69520|2,69520|4 and 70042|4,70042|2 as well, I don't think these jumps represent the music much at all, the song has much stronger sounds.