Itte.
Yorushika

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Created by: MartOwO
Submitted: over 3 years ago
Last updated: over 3 years ago
Source: 夏草が邪魔をする
Tags:
Pop, J-Pop, J-Rock, Natsukusa ga Jyama wo Suru, 言って。, ヨルシカ, suis, n-buna, Japanese
BPM: 180
Length: 3:16
Passes/Fails: 467 / 810

[4K] 9.97 - Say it.

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over 3 years ago

This "anchoring" pattern seems out of place - it makes the part tricky but lacks a musical support for it. I suggest moving some notes so this patterning disappear.


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over 3 years ago

185810|2,185976|2,186143|2,186310|2,186476|2 and 189310|2,189476|2,189643|2,189810|2,189976|2 also have this same problem and should be changed as well.

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over 3 years ago

I think the main problem with this map is unbalanced and uncomfortable stream patterns.

Take 168976|3,168976|1,169060|2,169143|1,169226|2,169310|3,169393|2,169476|1,169560|2 as an example - the patterning here is clearly skewed to the left. Though, there is not much reason to do so (as in, it is better if the patternings are more spread out).

This occurs on a lot of parts of the song. For example 92810|1,92893|2,92976|1,93060|2,93143|1,93226|2 these guitar here as well - it is a one hand trill which at this speed is really tricky and there's no musical support for this kinds of patternings. Following pitch / spreading out the column usage would make this much better.

These weird unbalance stuffs occurs all over this set - and I think it is best to rework them somehow.

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over 3 years ago

These are different pitch, and it seems like you are doing following this part mainly with pitch - so 111643|2 should be moved to 3rd column


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over 3 years ago

Also 122143|3,122310|3

Unless pitch isn't your intention here, these should be changed

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over 3 years ago

130810|3,130976|3 apart from not being with pitch, this seems to overemphasize the vocals so I'd say it should also be changed here

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over 3 years ago

This patterning (called in mapping term as minijack) seems out of place since the map never used this pattern for such a fast rhythm before, it is also quite hard to hit accurately compared to other patterns. Moving one of the notes here away should be better.

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over 3 years ago

98310|4,98393|3,98476|2,98560|3,98643|4,98726|3,98810|2,98893|3 for these. I suggest sticking to doing smth like 97643|3,97726|2,97810|1,97976|4,97976|1,98060|3,98143|2 to show more of consistency

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over 3 years ago

Shouldn't be double as there's only guitar here and it's not louder than the other guitars nearby

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over 3 years ago

Not really much was being emphasized from 81976|4,82143|3,82310|4,82476|3,82643|4,82810|3,82976|4 this one hand trill patterning. I suggest spread the notes here out.

Also since you previous play the drums at 71977, you should try playing these rhythm at 82477 as well

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over 3 years ago

These are really tricky to hit and seemed to not be super consistent with the difficulty this map was aiming for in the previous parts. You can try spread the patterning out more - like this for example:

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over 3 years ago

missing a note for vocal

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over 3 years ago

These triples/hands seemed out of nowhere when previous parts like 55976|1,55976|3,56310|2,56310|3,56643|4,56643|1 these are played with doubles/jumps

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over 3 years ago

Inconsistency between 4976|3,5143|2,5310|3,5310|4 and 10143|2,10310|2 - first one you are playing drums while the second you're playing guitar even though they exist in similar parts of the song


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over 3 years ago

To solve this is you should choose similar type of structure to follow for both of them.