You can actually move 58109|3 to the fourth column and 58211|1 to the third for follow the pitch of the piano more accurately (and do the same with 58930|2,59033|4, but moving 58930|2 to the first column and 59033|4 to the second)
Now apply the same logic but with this notes, it should be look like mirrored compared with the previous pattern, aaand apply to the next patterns too (19376, 22664, 25951)
Move 71362|1 to the third column, at this way it sounds more accurate
This sound more like a descending stair, you can move 70540|1 to the third and 70643|4 to the second column
You can actually move 58109|3 to the fourth column and 58211|1 to the third for follow the pitch of the piano more accurately (and do the same with 58930|2,59033|4, but moving 58930|2 to the first column and 59033|4 to the second)
Now apply the same logic but with this notes, it should be look like mirrored compared with the previous pattern, aaand apply to the next patterns too (19376, 22664, 25951)
The same logic, but for being sure:
Apply the same as https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/48078/mods#mod_3815 too
Apply the same as https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/48078/mods#mod_3815
Since your proposal is Pitch-Based, this feels weird at the piano. i suggest to:
the pitch feels like more a stair than a 1-4-1-4-1-4.