I think this note should be removed : The LNs are representing long electronic sounds, this sound is very brief and feels more like a release accompanied by a note (which is what you would have by simply removing this LN). Try to think about the movements of the player during this note and you'll get what I mean by how this represents the music better
Judging by the complexity of the rest, you should have represented more accurately the sound at the end of this LN. I will be directly suggesting a pattern for this section. Please notice that the guitar at the end of the pattern should also be in 1/3 and not 1/4. Currently : https://i.imgur.com/rTMi1P6.png | Proposed : https://i.imgur.com/GxqoRml.png
Also take note that the pattern at the end would be more pitch relevant if inverted, but I focused more on hand balance since this remains an easy map. If you want to restructure to make it pitch relevant, give it a go.
The notes after are incorrectly timed, please refer to the screenshot from my proposed solution for correct timing : https://i.imgur.com/GxqoRml.png
I think this note should be removed : The LNs are representing long electronic sounds, this sound is very brief and feels more like a release accompanied by a note (which is what you would have by simply removing this LN). Try to think about the movements of the player during this note and you'll get what I mean by how this represents the music better
Same here 213021|1
214735|1
218164|1
219878|2
221592|1
225021|2
226735|1
228450|3
And you get the idea. Remember this is only a suggestion
Just like on bottom diff, this pattern doesn't start at the right time.
Judging by the complexity of the rest, you should have represented more accurately the sound at the end of this LN. I will be directly suggesting a pattern for this section. Please notice that the guitar at the end of the pattern should also be in 1/3 and not 1/4. Currently : https://i.imgur.com/rTMi1P6.png | Proposed : https://i.imgur.com/GxqoRml.png
Also take note that the pattern at the end would be more pitch relevant if inverted, but I focused more on hand balance since this remains an easy map. If you want to restructure to make it pitch relevant, give it a go.
Offset by 1/4