This SV (the third part) makes the pattern unreadable and awkward please find something better
This LN is way too short, it's not right
There is nothing here, but the song starts back here, as the same time as the LN
Note is unsnapped
Not sure what you did there, but it doesn't look correct ? Maybe just extend the LN ?
This SV needs to be less harsh, slow down is ok but not that much