starting at 112445|2,112445|3,112445|4,112445|1 why quads all of a sudden the previous section was chordjack without quads this feels unnecessary and excessive compared to the previous section
Considering the claps come in around this time, I liked the idea of the extra emphasis. I still think this fits the section and is a nice way to see the player off. If the difficulty spike isn't too harsh, it seems fine.
you can clearly see some vocal pitch changes please dont do one continuous jumpjacklongjack instead focus on the corresponding pitch and layer the notes accordingly to pitch those can also be single notes not jumps because its such a calm section before the climax
70130|3,70130|4,70209|2,70288|1,70288|3,70367|4,70446|1,70446|2,70446|3,70524|4,70603|1,70603|3,70682|2,70761|1,70761|3,70761|4 Bit of trill here but I think this pattern looks cool and seems better to play
instead of this because you have some funny blblkpblpblplbplpblpb noises here you can make it a broken trill or something like this idk think something because this chordjack alone doesnt contribute to anything alright fanm
there is more of these funny trills that are awful to play and i believe it wasnt your intention to include them here so please for the love of god imma not list them all but go through the map and try to balance it, you can see these imbalances when you zoom out a bit with pgup thanks
i dont remember what your original offset was but i think it was like 13 or something and its 1288 because thats where the first note is supposed to go
avoid jacks after complex snap
avoid anchors of 7 length, similar examples include 10446|4,10603|4,10761|4,10919|4,11077|4,11235|4,11393|4 and 12814|2,12972|2,13130|2,13288|2,13446|2,13603|2,13761|2,13919|2
most of these are on the right hand and this is very not great because balance is gone
Not the easiest section to fix balance on, but I did my best.
massive assjack
Fixed
starting at 112445|2,112445|3,112445|4,112445|1 why quads all of a sudden the previous section was chordjack without quads this feels unnecessary and excessive compared to the previous section
Considering the claps come in around this time, I liked the idea of the extra emphasis. I still think this fits the section and is a nice way to see the player off. If the difficulty spike isn't too harsh, it seems fine.
it is quite a spike but its fair
this section is pure chordjack but it has some blbplpblplbplbplp vocal sounds so please include them when mapping
ignore the NAN NAN NAN this wasnt supposed to be there i pasted something odd and it broke ok
make this stream 1/6 pls
uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
dont do this pls
it's true
longassjack
Column emphasis should be lightyears better now.
splittrills are worse to play than plain jumptrills do a jumptrill instead its a calm section
Fair
you can clearly see some vocal pitch changes please dont do one continuous jumpjacklongjack instead focus on the corresponding pitch and layer the notes accordingly to pitch those can also be single notes not jumps because its such a calm section before the climax
See comment for change at 59393. Pitch of instrumental is consistent in this section.
what even is that
I have no clue either hold on
70130|3,70130|4,70209|2,70288|1,70288|3,70367|4,70446|1,70446|2,70446|3,70524|4,70603|1,70603|3,70682|2,70761|1,70761|3,70761|4 Bit of trill here but I think this pattern looks cool and seems better to play
it was a mess before but it seems okay
instead of this because you have some funny blblkpblpblplbplpblpb noises here you can make it a broken trill or something like this idk think something because this chordjack alone doesnt contribute to anything alright fanm
Makes sense, but I specifically avoided charting this originally and want to hold to that.
lightyear long longjack please dont do this
Literally just moved the first two of these to column 3, this should be fine
there is more of these funny trills that are awful to play and i believe it wasnt your intention to include them here so please for the love of god imma not list them all but go through the map and try to balance it, you can see these imbalances when you zoom out a bit with pgup thanks
There are a few that seem forced, but I cleaned these up as best I can.
trill here again
Cleaned up. Longjack here is forced but it's all in the right hand so it should be fine.
longjack here dont do that pls
See comments on other edit here. A bit more of the lead-in is modified as well; I'm a bit worried about jank there but it's difficult to do too much
really unwanted trill here
Changed the flow a bit. There's still a bit of trill but it's probably better
due to this being the way it is the notes at 10840|4,10998|4 create uncomfortable unbalanced section
10446|2,10446|4 Would swapping this for a 1+4 work better, or does the bit from here to 11077|3 as a whole need remap?
just swap the notes so they arent cracked clustered on one hand
Did my best.
offset 1288
Would apply offset -15 work?
i dont remember what your original offset was but i think it was like 13 or something and its 1288 because thats where the first note is supposed to go
you need to add the value thats lacking in order to achieve 1288ms
Offset should be about on time.