Maybe at this part there could be long notes so the part doesn't feel very empty?
These notes could be moved down by one so it syncs up a bit better
Missing note.
44860
Same thing here
46029, 46419, 46419, 46809, 46906
Same thing on these.
There shouldn't be doubles here, you should rather have single notes laid out like this: 34828|2,35023|1,35218|2,35412|3,35607|2 due to the music being as equal as the music was before.
Missing notes.
This shouldnt be a double but rather a single note is just fine.
This note could be up by one to sync up with the music.
This part could have a bit of diversity.
Not quite sure on what I could do here though.
Equal sound to the earlier doubles but less notes? Add a double here instead.
Maybe at this part there could be long notes so the part doesn't feel very empty?
These notes could be moved down by one so it syncs up a bit better
Missing note.
44860
Same thing here
46029, 46419, 46419, 46809, 46906
Same thing on these.
There shouldn't be doubles here, you should rather have single notes laid out like this: 34828|2,35023|1,35218|2,35412|3,35607|2 due to the music being as equal as the music was before.
Missing notes.
This shouldnt be a double but rather a single note is just fine.
This note could be up by one to sync up with the music.
This part could have a bit of diversity.
Not quite sure on what I could do here though.
Equal sound to the earlier doubles but less notes? Add a double here instead.