Wolves Standing Towards Enemies
Camellia
Source:
Lanota
Tags:
UKHardcore, Hardcore, Tech, Speed
BPM:
191
Length:
2:44
Passes/Fails:
4317 / 3413
I'm a little confused as to what's actually being represented in the section beginning at this timestamp. What sound constitutes a hand, and why does it disappear at 85910|3 and after? Why is there a break between 85282|2 and 85439|1? Call me deaf, but I can't really hear anything that would make this layering actually correct with the music.
In case I'm not actually deaf and you're willing to remap this bit, try to listen in a bit closer - I'd say one of the most prominent sounds there are strings on 1/3. Maybe making it 1/3 jumpjack could work pretty well? Since it's a moment of extreme tension, maybe a polyrhythmic jumpstream between 1/4 and 1/3? Those sound like pretty decent choices to me, but it's up to you what you want this section to be.
I believe I've fixed it, thank you!
I won't take simplification for the sake of structure here, since it's just a simple singlestream - This glissando is at 1/6 here 74130|4,74208|2,74287|3,74365|1,74444|2 and at 1/3 after if you listen closely to it.
I'm not 100% sure if I got it right, please DM me on discord if I've done it improperly.
There are some inconsistencies in the part which begins at the timestamp. The piano rhythms are actually on 1/3, but if you wish to simplify it (like here 62742|4,62742|3,62821|2,62821|1,62899|3,62899|4) to preserve the jumpstream structure of that section, that's fine. The same three jump patterrn (one for the first piano chord, one for the beat and another one for the second piano chord) should appear at 63371|2,63449|3,63449|4,63528|2,63528|1 among others.
(of course that is if you don't want to actually make those chords on 1/3 as in the song and fit those between the 1/4 stream, I think it could add some cool technical flair to this section if done right)
I'll be preserving the full jumpstreams since it's a less intense section than the previous section and the player may need a bit more of a break. Thank you though!
this little bit should actually be 3 notes on 1/6 (repeat for every instance of that pattern)