Dragon's Sky

Powerless

These sounds should really be hands, and jacks. these are big loud powerful sounds, but you only give them jumps. This especially makes the transition to quads afterwards very jarring and doessn't flow very well.

another missing jump

why does the 1/4 stream stop here? there should be a continuous 1/4 stream until 121360 You should follow the sound all the way, or not follow it at all.

if you're going to chart these notes, please chart all of them, there are plenty of missed notes between the hands in this section like 101623, 102939, 103202 to name a few

these notes should actually be 1/6

this section sufferers heavily from unbalanced patterns. you have 4 keys, use them. This entire section needs to be repattern to get better hand balance

this jack is heavily inconsistent with the rest of the chart and the song. there should only be a 2 note jack like 18991|3,19122|4,19254|4

these jumps should be on the same keys, since they are the same sound. currently with all the jumps for different sounds it gets kind of confusing what notes are for what while playing, and right now it looks like 63728|1,63728|2,63991|2,63991|1 should be a repeated note when its not.

this jack feels random and out of place. what is it even for?

no jump like 47675|2,47675|1,47938|1,47938|4 ? its arguable these should even be hands

22149, 23728, 24518 should have hands like 25307 and 18991 there are plenty of examples where hands should be used for these kinds of sounds in the chart, but you only use them some of the time.

also apply to:
30044, 30833, 31623, 39518, 41097, 45833, 54518, 56886, 61623, 62412, 107412, 110570, 113728, 122412, 123202, 124781, 129518, 138202, 140570, 145307, 146097

shouldn't this be a single note?

this section has a lot of heavy 3 usage like 21096|3,21359|3,21622|3,21886|3 and especially heavy on the right hand with 24386|3,24517|4,24649|3,24912|3,25044|4,25175|3,25307|4,25438|3,25570|4,25701|3 Balance this section out more. A lot of patterns in this chart need to be balanced out like this.

considering the calmness of this section, you should avoid jacks like this. Save the more difficult patterns for when the song gets more intense.

shouldn't be jacks

no jacks?

the bpm should be placed at 1623 with a BPM of 228 with Signature: 3 added to the .qua to fix the time signature. Alternatively you can use 76 bpm. whichever one you like better can work. The rest of the mods are applied using the old bpm.