thanks for the mods, I checked out some things and I am fully aware that this diff is a bit messy, but I think its best to keep it the way it is and only fix very noticeable/important issues
made some changes but not going to accept/deny mods because its not always 100% accurate
1:30.829~1:33.713
I can't understand this part.
In the previous part, the sound was filled with a very complex and difficult skill set, but this place is very empty.
Although the parts have similar melodies, they show a very extreme difference.
1:30.829~1:33.713
이 파트를 이해할수 없습니다.
이전 파트에서 아주 복잡하고 어려운 스킬셋으로 사운드를 체워 주었지만 이곳은 굉장히 허전합니다.
비슷한 멜로디의 파트임에도 너무 극심한 차이를 보여줍니다.
'68733|3'Also, the voice here has a long-form feel, but the voice that follows is very short, so a place like '69079|3,70925|2' is not suitable.
Or if all of these are to be expressed, more must be expressed in this part.
(70579|3 this looks fine)
'68733|3' 또한 이곳 보이스는 긴 형태의 효과를 따르는데 이후 나오는 것들의 대부분은 짧은 느낌의 보이스라서 '69079|3,70925|2' 이곳은 어울리지 않아 보입니다.
(70579|3 이것은 괜찮아 보입니다)
I think a lot of the melodies in this part have a strong sense of being skipped.
Even so, how about a little more detailed expression since the patterning has progressed to some extent?
이 파트에서 상당수의 멜로디가 스킵된 느낌이 강하다고 생각 됩니다.
그럼에도 어느정도 패턴화가 진행되어 있어 조금 더 세밀한 표현은 어떨까요?
thanks for the mods, I checked out some things and I am fully aware that this diff is a bit messy, but I think its best to keep it the way it is and only fix very noticeable/important issues
made some changes but not going to accept/deny mods because its not always 100% accurate
Ghost + Doesn't look good.
umm…
Check out the drum beat.
107790|1,107790|3,107906|2,107906|4 something in between
double
105252|2,105252|3 single
1:30.829~1:33.713
I can't understand this part.
In the previous part, the sound was filled with a very complex and difficult skill set, but this place is very empty.
Although the parts have similar melodies, they show a very extreme difference.
1:30.829~1:33.713
이 파트를 이해할수 없습니다.
이전 파트에서 아주 복잡하고 어려운 스킬셋으로 사운드를 체워 주었지만 이곳은 굉장히 허전합니다.
비슷한 멜로디의 파트임에도 너무 극심한 차이를 보여줍니다.
88175|1,88175|4 89329|1,89329|4 90021|2,90021|1 Consistency issues
68675|1,68675|4 The reason this should be a double is almost certain.
'68733|3'Also, the voice here has a long-form feel, but the voice that follows is very short, so a place like '69079|3,70925|2' is not suitable.
Or if all of these are to be expressed, more must be expressed in this part.
(70579|3 this looks fine)
'68733|3' 또한 이곳 보이스는 긴 형태의 효과를 따르는데 이후 나오는 것들의 대부분은 짧은 느낌의 보이스라서 '69079|3,70925|2' 이곳은 어울리지 않아 보입니다.
(70579|3 이것은 괜찮아 보입니다)
69483|2,69483|3,69483|1 double
Start is single.
See 62444|1,62675|3,63136|2,63136|1
Or if it's a different intention, please explain it. :)
triple
This seems to have been used more than necessary.
Even a simple single is expressive enough.
62386|3 It should be different from this (or delete it)
Perhaps this should be a triple.
ghost. this looks pretty bad
55925|2
ghost?
I do not know. But I don't feel this is necessary.
58348|1,58579|4
same here
58752 Rather, it should be expressed as a 1/4 snap here.
Only here, ignoring the difference in melody, a mini jack is formed.
35675|4,35675|3,35790|2,35790|1 see this
이곳만 멜로디의 차이를 무시하고 미니잭으로 만들어져 있습니다.
35675|4,35675|3,35790|2,35790|1 이것을 참조
I think a lot of the melodies in this part have a strong sense of being skipped.
Even so, how about a little more detailed expression since the patterning has progressed to some extent?
이 파트에서 상당수의 멜로디가 스킵된 느낌이 강하다고 생각 됩니다.
그럼에도 어느정도 패턴화가 진행되어 있어 조금 더 세밀한 표현은 어떨까요?
ex