THE WORLD REVOLVING (Camellia Remix)
Toby Fox
Source:
Deltarune
Tags:
jevil, clown, remix, the world revolving, camellia remix, j-core, hardcore, camellia
BPM:
210
Length:
6:44
Passes/Fails:
164 / 715
Not even a bad thing to say, just beautiful section for this part haha love it
thanks!
You could make these triples to make them stand out in this section, but it's your choice there
And then as the kicks diminish return down to double again, then single when it's melody
keeping as is :(
Missing sounds for the vocals
That's what those two ln are, probably should time them better to make this more apparent.
This section should probably have quads on the main beat that stands out as well
You could maybe do a jump trill to help make that rolling background sound stand out from your handstream
Double
166285|3
Missing here as well
keeping as is
Why did you stop representing the kicks in the stream, an into the ln section after? Ex. 161285|2, 161571|4
Missing sounds
157642|2, 157499|3
I do not hear this whatsoever, even when slowed down.
wait im stupid
Hella anchor in this lane
125428|1 Same in this lane
I knew this one was coming lmfao
For your jack section due the difficulty already, don't be afraid to use quads for occasional sound emphasis, it'd help to distinguish certain sounds out of the grander melody
I think I'm going to keep this as is.
Kick starts here, represent them with doubles
56856|3, 56928|2, 56999|4
Same with these
Ghost note, remove
55571|4 Same here
Triple
You get it, use the triple for your bigger sounds in the section, slow it down to hear it. Double for the melody
Double
Triple
Double