you're representing the melody as jumps in this section - therefore this should be a single note (example of a single note for the same sound: 18138|1)
the trill doesn't appear in this section later or earlier, and isn't mapper to any particular sound to highlight it - I would suggest to make it similar to the other patterns around it to not overemphasise one hand for no particular reason
these aren't really representing any sound, are they? also they make the clap at 17428|3,17428|2 underemphasised
missed a note
21408 I mean lol
you're representing the melody as jumps in this section - therefore this should be a single note (example of a single note for the same sound: 18138|1)
23572|1,23572|2 the first timestamp got bugged I think so here's the right one, apologies
the trill doesn't appear in this section later or earlier, and isn't mapper to any particular sound to highlight it - I would suggest to make it similar to the other patterns around it to not overemphasise one hand for no particular reason
48199|1,48286|2,48373|1,48460|3 vs 53780|2,53867|1,53954|2,54042|1 inconsistency - generally be wary of willy nilly onehanded trills - they are not equal patterns to other single streams, both in context of gameplay and music representation
The map could work on consistency a bit more - here are notable points:
Generally speaking the things to work on consistency-wise are:
also add this to examples 43315|2,43489|2,43664|2,43838|2,44013|2