This Is War
UNDEAD CORPORATION
Source:
Extreme Steel
Tags:
Melodic Death Metal, Stamina, 東方, パインツリー, 極鉄, Lunate Elf, Doujin Works, 東方紅魔郷 ～ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil, EoSD, Daiyuousei, Touhou Koumakyou ~ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil
BPM:
280
Length:
4:03
Passes/Fails:
442 / 1861
Besides the other points about these bursts, are you sure you want this random bridge section to be the hardest part of the map? Because right now it is. If you're like me and don't think so, maybe try another layering scheme? How about emphasising the harder guitar chords with hands, and the other ones with jumps? I mean things like 61341|4,61341|1,61341|2, 61877|4,61877|3 and 62520|3,62520|1. Since the chords don't always occur in regular intervals, it could also help make the patterning a tiny bit more interesting without the whole thing losing structure.
i think it's fine the way it is
This hand lacks the crash on the drums, so I think it's better to make it a jump
Also 03:42.110 is missing a note, what a coincidence
Watch out for those! Anchors like this aren't really used in the map's chordjacks anyways, and here they're introduced inside bursts which makes the whole thing even more disproportionate.
While you're at it, try to rethink how you approach those 2-1-3 bursts too. You may notice that bursts like 221306|3,221306|4,221359|2,221413|3,221413|4,221413|1 are actually easier than others, because the inevitable three-note trills (221306|3,221359|2,221413|3 and 221306|4,221359|2,221413|4) are two-handed. Knowing this and paying attention to anchors and not to overstress either hand by applying the onehanded trill movements too much there you should be able to balance out the difficulty of these burst sections a lot better - for instance by alternating the easier and harder variants of them.
(note: it's unadvised to add only the easier ones - that makes the section supoer easy to manip and generally boring)
235448|4,235448|2,235502|3,235556|4,235556|1,235556|2,235663|4,235663|1,235716|3,235770|2,235770|1,235770|4,235877|2,235877|3,235931|4,235984|2,235984|1,235984|3 this is a notable situation of the point about too many trilly movements being on the same hand in a row. It's a little mitigated here by the trill movements being different every time, but it's still unwanted probably