i don't know what are these notes follow to but if you intend to make a dump here i don't think that would work in here because there's only kick sound, or if these are flams then i also don't hear any kick sound than in 68652|3,68652|4,68792|3,68792|4 so it should be deleted.
there are only growl vocal not kick or snare and i think LN would be better to cover the vocal so i suggest this one to fix it https://prnt.sc/uxyZUgZ3aFPt
7118, 7397, 7955 and 8234 could add some LN for guitar like you did before
double for kick
probably you want to change this to triple for cymbal
i don't know what are these notes follow to but if you intend to make a dump here i don't think that would work in here because there's only kick sound, or if these are flams then i also don't hear any kick sound than in 68652|3,68652|4,68792|3,68792|4 so it should be deleted.
same with 120018|3,120158|3
they are not snare but tom which the sound is lower than snare so maybe you want to reduce them to doubles
same with 175668|1,175668|3,175668|4,175807|2,175807|3,175807|4
here also no kick, only guitar unless you still want to keep it then sure, if no then reduce to double
there are only growl vocal not kick or snare and i think LN would be better to cover the vocal so i suggest this one to fix it https://prnt.sc/uxyZUgZ3aFPt
missing a kick here
same with 15978
reduce to double for consistency kick
add a note for cymbal here
and also 191994 for kick
these are only tom not kick or snare and 193180 is a ghost note, make it like this https://prnt.sc/4n8T1OR7ObYd should be fine
not double? there's a kick tho
delete this note because there's no kick, put it in 209016|1 instead
from 150134 until 154320 only put a dense handstream straight here isn't a good idea because you keep missed some kicks in blue line like 150343|4, 150901|2, 151459|4, 152017|1, etc. i suggest you to make it like this https://prnt.sc/_o3WWTf2inXe so you don't miss the kick in blue line