zero_one (Camellia Remix)
The Living Tombstone
Source:
zero_one:reloaded
Tags:
hardcore electronic english LN かめるかめりあ cametek 大箭将也 masaya oya kamelcamellia kamel
BPM:
145
Length:
5:33
Passes/Fails:
307 / 1952
(this is like rly nitpicky and is more of a subjective matter but)
You have inverses, jacks and LN graces for the last 8 seconds then you apply really loose triples which doesn't really flow well imo. Personally I'd use 1/4 - 5/16 - 3/8 (the exception is 332991|3) progression (i tested and it's SSable), however if that doesn't go along with your intention, feel free to ignore!
(and finally sorry for scattering the mods throughout over a day LMAO)
i do understand that it might not be the smoothest transition into the ending in the world plus not that the end inverse plays super comfortable, but i tried a lot of alternatives and i cant do a better job than what it was
i think maybe its fine as it is
I don't think this is impact enough to make a triple, a double should work fine considering the section around this is acting as a buildup. (nitpick stuffs but here's a mini suggestion https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/884302362733346886/990636549370675250/unknown.png)
rearranged
Is this wrongly snapped? I hear -- -- instead of --- - so consider relooking at this
was mapping in 100%, it sounded messy so i just do what i used to do lol
will change
A whoosh can be clearly heard here. I think you left this as a single quad for focused-emphasis purposes but due to this sound's obvious audibility, this feels odd to be left out as a single quad. Made something that can be used: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/884302362733346886/990230802631626792/unknown.png
Applies to 193376 as well, also made sth: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/884302362733346886/990231492271669299/unknown.png
i was planning to add svs here but ultimately i decided not to since some people might not enjoy the jumpscare
i found it a cool chill off moment before the storm so i might as well let it be simple and straight forward i guess
i dont feel like adding this one yet hopefully its not too big of an issue
This is surprisingly heavy/dense for a low-volume sound with bridging purposes, applying a 2-note LN grace should be enough already. I suggest using https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/884302362733346886/990114174128509008/unknown.png (1/5 snapping used here but you can use sth else)
yea so this part in my head there was this thought of mapping a stair grace into a drop would make the start of the dubstep part more impactful, i did this a lot and it feels like it fits. but i do a gree its a lot of notes there so is it possible for me to keep the idea and nerf it cuz i like it
ill remove the longest ln and rearrange the stuff a bit and see if it works
To show volume difference better, I think these can be made as 1/3 LNs. In addition, 106674|2 can be made as rice too for the same reason
Applies to 311233 as well
all both changed to 1/2 lns, hope it works
There are many used of irregular snaps so there may be some white colored notes