Sugar Loli
Slax
Source:
n/a
Tags:
ktmcd, 0428, and&end, t-ara, tara, tΛrΛ, 티아라, electronic k-pop, j-core, korean
BPM:
205
Length:
2:30
Passes/Fails:
2861 / 2484
don't understand why this repeated section is 1/2 jumpstream when 39271 is chords? make this consistent please by either mirroring this section to the first or the other way around
that goes for the whole section up to 86978 btw
good point, fixed
"sugar free" sample here isn't represented when compared to 19076, is also wrongly snapped and should be 125100 to represent the sugar free sample correctly
changed
transition here is weird, what if you represented the 1/3 synth with single notes like this into the 1/4 stream buildup? sorta like this:
true that, fixed
hand and missing note when compared with 112636|2,112636|4,112734|1,112734|3 similar to https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/81974/mods#mod_8689
119759 anotha one (missing jump) for consistency
fixed both
jump is placed on the wrong snap to represent the finish, move it down to 115953
yes, fixed
why is this a hand when 112636|2,112636|4,112734|1,112734|3 is not? seems inconsistently placed
removed
this section is the same as https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/81974/mods#mod_8687 with jumps feeling randomly placed, there's also slight drum fills that aren't represented here and definitely could be if you so choose
changed that section into a jumpstream one, like 29612|4 etc.
the jump/chord one that comes after has been modified following your suggestions on https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/81974/mods#mod_8687 since it's the same played for the second time
I understand the hands are for the emphasised vocals, but they emphasise these vocals in triplets. I wonder if you did something like hands on 39563|3,39563|4,39856|2,39856|4 and 40734|1,40734|2,41026|3,41026|4 etc. the jumps placed in this section also feel random, a little bit of pitch relevancy towards the vocals might be a bit better? up to you but i think would be a neat idea
i added those chord + some 1/4 notes when vocals were denser in that section, hope it's a bit better now.
possibly make this a hand for the climax of the vocals / ending of the section?
ok
this is on the wrong snap, put it on the 1/4 snap at 19149 instead
fixed
the 1/3 stream feels weird here and doesn't reflect the building of the song very well, would be better to either have chords into a 1/4 stream climax or do some lighter patterns transitioning into denser as the intro builds to 16734 but you can do whatever
added some 1/4 streams following vocals
check over the mapset for any more chord inconsistencies, in general I think this chart is alright but the jumpstream is quite uninteresting and there's a lot of missed potential patterning with the song, if possible I would like to see a bit more interesting patterns utilised in the chorus but that's just my opinion
checked other choruses as well, fixed those vocal doubles inconsistencies
about the dense jumpstreams in the choruses, that was my main idea to go with the map, as in my opinion those can reflect well the high bpm energetic melody that the song has, since other types of patterns felt too underwhelming to play imo.
if you have any more suggestions feel free to post them, i'll surely consider them! : )
jump is on the wrong snap presumably, should be moved down to 57563
fixed
chorus section has inconsistent chord sizes for the vocals, check over and make sure you're not missing any (eg 52368|1,54417|4,55587|1)
fixed, i think
let me know if i missed something, thank you
i'm not sure why you're dumping this section entirely, it feels really out of place for the song so i would suggest either accurately charting it or make it a bit more focused on the vocals here
following vocals now
would suggest adding a burst here for the trilling synth, seems like it's appropriate but up to you
sure
missing note when compared with 112636|2,112636|4, also applies here at 112636|2,112636|4 and 119368|4,119368|3
also applies to the beginning where this section repeats
done, please recheck the beginning as i may have misunderstood it
inconsistent representation of these vocals when compared with 88441|4,88441|2,88734|3,88734|2,89026|4,89026|1
fixed