Jungle Joyride (Day) (Cut Ver.)

Tomoya Ohtani

this section feels very underwhelming when compared with the last, would recommend representing some of the background trilling synth as 1/4 notes just to make it feel less awkward and spaced out but you can do whatever, just needs changing

entire section here is too dense for a break, the quads especially used throughout very out of place when the intensity is much lower than when used in the chorus. I would suggest making this less dense for starters / possibly removing the jacking element entirely making it light js with hands for the emphasised melodies eg 140502|3,140502|2,140502|1,140502|4

section here feels very out of place, ignoring the entire percussion focusing solely on the flute with dumped stream and no variation makes for a very odd section, I would suggest layering in some of the percussion just to reflect the song better imo