Blue Zenith

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131464|3, 151564|4, 201064|2 and 221164|1 - i hear no instrumental bell here, if this is true then change the LNs to a normal note

221164, 219964 - contrary to the above, there are noticeable enough bells here to use LNs, add if correct

honestly don't get why these are shortened by 1/4 like this, they should end on the white ticks (1/1 bars/lines) to fit the music + consistency with other LNs around

i'm pretty sure this is missnapped, move to 171176

i get that the anchor at 134164 is intentional but this is some quite indelicate placement. i suggest moving this ln 134164|4 to col 2 and the anchor to col 4.

the thing is that it'll overlap with the col4 anchor at 135364, so consider rearranging the section a lil bit.

i honestly don't think the speedup SV here is fitting, there's no density/volume/emphasis increase in music which are noticeable enough to use such a harsh speedup

the beeps start here so using a trill like 59164 would reflect it better