Good-bye sengen
Amatsuka Uto

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Created by: Akiwi
Submitted: over 2 years ago
Ranked: over 2 years ago
Source: n/a
Tags:
Jpop, Rock, Cover, Chinozo, Goodbye Decloration, Japanese, Pop, Jrock, Vtuber, Virtual Youtuber, J
BPM: 170
Length: 2:51
Passes/Fails: 1666 / 2061

[4K] 28.94 - Sayonara

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Cuckson
Ranking Supervisor
over 2 years ago

the drum climax for this section should have all the percussion layered as hands (replace 167377|3,167377|4,168083|1,168083|3,168789|3,168789|4 etc) just because it makes sense to reflect the matched intensity of each hit. i think it would work well to end off also

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Cuckson
Ranking Supervisor
over 2 years ago

hand for the finish here? its quite a loud crash

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Cuckson
Ranking Supervisor
over 2 years ago

this section represents the solo quite poorly with the layering of the still very prominent and notable sections in the song just getting dumped over with no clear representation (such as the hi hat trills like 105789|3,105877|2,106848|2,106936|1,108612|2,108701|4). I can see some of your patterning based on the guitar pitch which is cool but a bit less dumped js here and more accurate charting would be cooler to me and do a good job of making the next section feeling a bit stronger

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Cuckson
Ranking Supervisor
over 2 years ago

make this section a bit harder to reflect the intensity of the drum fills?

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Cuckson
Ranking Supervisor
over 2 years ago

for these emphasised vocals like the given timestamp (also 17025 and 18083) you could layer these as hands? just to make them a bit more distinct but up to you

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Cuckson
Ranking Supervisor
over 2 years ago

definitely string percussion here, should be represented the same as the rest of the section

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Cuckson
Ranking Supervisor
over 2 years ago

if this is to represent the prominent strings here you could do the same for 73054|1 and sacrifice the layering of the hand for the snare? up to you

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Cuckson
Ranking Supervisor
over 2 years ago

repeat the first hand for pr?

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Cuckson
Ranking Supervisor
over 2 years ago

no kick here compared to the other hands proceeding it, i would reduce this to a single note just because the guitar is super weak and doesn't really justify any more representation than that