inherently there's nothing wrong with this section but i'm wondering why you're now charting 1/6 light js for the guitar only when earlier it was dense handstream? try to keep your ideas consistent please
snares like these in this section not getting layered/mislayered on the wrong snap, I would strongly suggest layering these in as they're so prominent in this moment
not sure why the hands for the dense chordjack section stop here (compare to 33951|3,33951|4,33951|2,34270|3,34270|2,34270|1) as it's not for the vocals because they continue till 36345 and the drums haven't dropped in intensity so it's confused me a little bit.
layering in this section here is quite nonsensical, feels like you tried to represent everything at once and it ends up being a total mess. for example the split trills here at 21344|4,21344|1,21424|3,21424|2,21504|1,21504|4,21584|2,21584|3,21663|4,21663|1 seem to represent the held guitar note but then you switch to focusing on the vocals here at 22302|2,22302|3,22302|4,22461|2,22461|3,22461|4 instead of repeating the trills for the second held guitar note. try to hone in on a few prominent instruments/vocals so that the layering and your ideas are a bit more clear
chord usage in this section is cool for the drum triplets. suggestion is to make 20706|2,20706|1,20706|4 a quad for the ending snare just to distinctify it from all the other hands in this part
chord sizes in this section don't really make much sense, the underlying kicks are not really consistently layered/layered at all (1557|4 single note, 2195|2,2195|4 jump) and I believe it's because your intention was to chart the guitar and the density is based off of the intensity of that but i'm unsire.
inherently there's nothing wrong with this section but i'm wondering why you're now charting 1/6 light js for the guitar only when earlier it was dense handstream? try to keep your ideas consistent please
snares like these in this section not getting layered/mislayered on the wrong snap, I would strongly suggest layering these in as they're so prominent in this moment
the 1/2 notes being the same density as 36663|2,36663|4,36982|4,36982|1 is a bit strange and doesn't do well to highlight the guitar here
not sure why the hands for the dense chordjack section stop here (compare to 33951|3,33951|4,33951|2,34270|3,34270|2,34270|1) as it's not for the vocals because they continue till 36345 and the drums haven't dropped in intensity so it's confused me a little bit.
layering in this section here is quite nonsensical, feels like you tried to represent everything at once and it ends up being a total mess. for example the split trills here at 21344|4,21344|1,21424|3,21424|2,21504|1,21504|4,21584|2,21584|3,21663|4,21663|1 seem to represent the held guitar note but then you switch to focusing on the vocals here at 22302|2,22302|3,22302|4,22461|2,22461|3,22461|4 instead of repeating the trills for the second held guitar note. try to hone in on a few prominent instruments/vocals so that the layering and your ideas are a bit more clear
chord usage in this section is cool for the drum triplets. suggestion is to make 20706|2,20706|1,20706|4 a quad for the ending snare just to distinctify it from all the other hands in this part
why do these turn into quads compared to the 2 snares before it? (4429|1,4429|4,4429|3,4748|4,4748|3,4748|2)
chord sizes in this section don't really make much sense, the underlying kicks are not really consistently layered/layered at all (1557|4 single note, 2195|2,2195|4 jump) and I believe it's because your intention was to chart the guitar and the density is based off of the intensity of that but i'm unsire.
intro here feels really overcharted for the intensity of the song and also ruins the difficulty progression entirely.