CRUISE BEAST
The Quick Brown Fox
Source:
BRUTAL RHYTHM RIDER
Tags:
Speedcore, EDM, Chordjacks, Speedjacks, Stamina
BPM:
260
Length:
2:36
Passes/Fails:
65 / 123
i find this section has missing chord like 7881 , 8804 , 9727 , 10650 etc, you could add 1 more note and rearrange to avoid 3 anchor and it's reasonable to make it same as 14804 - 21727
17919|3,18034|3,18150|3 rearrange this 3 anchor or ignore if this was your intention, just make it same as first section 7420
Jack inconsistency. everything should be connected with eachother according to earlier layering at 10189 and 8343
Should be a jump not a single
These should not be anchored and 13534|3 should be anchored with 13650|2,13650|4 instead
These should be anchored according to layering at 9842|3,9958|2,9958|3 and 11688|3,11804|4,11804|3
The song repeats itself and so should the map (at least in terms of intensity, which can be either the same or harder for the latter section), and the suggestions for the previous section will be the same for both sections.
Chord sizes here doesn't really fit with the music, some 1/2 notes being double and some being singles, it's not obvious what layering this section is going for. Consider reworking the layering here.
(Up to 65573)
Same as the intro, make use of anchors and patternings.
Consider using anchors as representation for the addition melody in the background rather than chord sizes, keep the patterns in mind as well.
Missing doubles at 8919 and 10765 etc.
(Up to 22188)
Consider moving this note to column 4 to keep the consistency
In the following section and repeating similar section id suggest mapping the 1/4th notes that you are currently ignoring at for example 67362 and then reworking the jump below into a single like https://i.imgur.com/i7HTfr6.jpg , repeat this process
Ghost note, Representing nothing
Should be a jump since 152573|1,152573|3 , 148881|1,148881|3 are also jumps
also applies to 32573
I'm sorry, but I don't see the need to make them doubles since they don't map to any particular sound in the music that requires it.
Should be anchored to be consistent with each other for "consistency" with 152458|1,152573|1,152688|1 , 148765|1,148881|1,148996|1 etc.
also applies to 32458|3,32573|1,32688|1
This should be a jumptrill for consistency in this section
108958|1,108958|4,109015|3,109073|2,109073|4,109131|1,109188|3,109188|4,109246|1,109304|2,109304|4,109419|4,109419|2,109419|1,109534|1,109534|3 this as well
This section feels both undermapped and overmapped, having single notes going to some sounds in accordance with some LN placement while others just don't go to anything and have little to no reason being there, making this part of the chart a lot more cluttered than it needs to be, go back through this part at a slower playback speed to accurately place notes to things happening in the song
I do agree some notes are placed incorrectly, but once again, most of the single notes are mapped to the snares, so I will fix some issues, just not the ones you described
Edit: Some sounds were not mapped consistently, and other sounds weren't mapped at all, I am fixing this, but please tell me if anything else is wrong with it
This section still feels super underwhelming and could greatly benefit from more dense patterning, stuff that isn't just on the 1/2nd and 1/1st lines
Yes it is slightly under-charted, only because I want most of the difficulty coming from the main part at 01:36.035
I'll try replacing the singles with doubles and remove jacks instead
Edit: I've added doubles to where the melody falls, and I don't really know what to add to deviate from the 2nd and 1st lines
Should be a jump for the sound it's mapped to
This pattern on the right hand side during this section doesn't really contribute anything to represent what's going on in the song, you should probably remove them and maybe shift around some of the jacks in this section as well
There is more than one instance of this during the buildups by the way
they contribute to the snares
and the ln's have a second notes to act as doubles so its not undercharted
flip this so that there's less strain on the right hand
102958|2,102958|1,103015|4,103015|3,103073|1,103073|2,103131|4,103131|3,103188|1,103188|2,103246|3,103246|4,103304|1,103304|2,103361|4,103361|3,103419|2,103419|1 - flip to reduce strain on left hand
These notes are only vaguely mapped to the guitar
This section is really undermapped and as such feels out of place for the chart, so I'd suggest going through this again (maybe at a lower playback speed) until 64650 so it can better match the difficulty of the chart
Missing note
This trill should be moved down to 43766
Make this a jump for consistency
Apply this mod for similar instances btw
The pattern being mapped like this also lacks musical justification, as the noise they're mapped to is consistent throughout, so changing the density every 1/1 and 1/4 doesn't really make sense
Mapping a js pattern to this section doesn't really make sense, as there are no notable noises to justify a jump on the 1/2 line, so it'd be preferable to either make it a jumptrill or just single notes all throughout
You should remove one of the singles here to make it a jump for consistency
Follow this for similar instances of this issue btw
This note doesn't go to anything
You should probably make these jumps, and should follow this mod with similar instances of this pattern
16073|2 15842|3
Since it didn't wanna show up in the mod
These notes don't go to anything
The switching of chord sizes on 1/2 and 1/1 doesn't really make sense here, you should probably just continue following the structure already present instead of changing it
These patterns should follow a similar structure to that of 9496|1,9496|3,9611|2,9611|3,9727|4,9727|3 for density consistency
This note doesn't go to anything