Slow Dancing In The Dark (Akiri's Brightness Remix)
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Created by: Campingscrub
Submitted: almost 2 years ago
Ranked: over 1 year ago
Source: n/a
Tags:
EDM, electronic, depressing, streams, alternative, future bass
BPM: 89
Length: 3:46
Passes/Fails: 5136 / 7482

[4K] 18.07 - Nightfall

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Linlime
Ranking Supervisor
over 1 year ago

This drum is really loud in compare to jumps like 172091|1,172091|3,172260|4,172260|2 . So I'd recommend turning it into a hand

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Linlime
Ranking Supervisor
over 1 year ago

This has a clear delay which is also visible on the waveform. My suggestion would be to turn this into a grace and move 172260|4 up 1/12th


Campingscrub
Creator
over 1 year ago

I see what you mean but I think since the sound at 2:52.260 is louder than at 2:52.316, it should be kept

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Issue
Linlime
Ranking Supervisor
over 1 year ago

Another vocal syllable here if I'm not deaf


Linlime
Ranking Supervisor
over 1 year ago

167035 same here

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Issue
Linlime
Ranking Supervisor
over 1 year ago

In the vocal section after this there seem to be a few missing notes other then the already given other suggestion about changing up the layering a bit. 45350 and 45687 should have notes since 50743|2,51080|1 are also mapped out. 59170 is also a missing note. 61867 also a missing note.
Since you decided to map out 58496|4 means you should either remove it or also map 50406 and 45013

Other then that


Linlime
Ranking Supervisor
over 1 year ago

there is no other then that woopps

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Issue
Linlime
Ranking Supervisor
over 1 year ago

Alright so hold in tight this is gonna be a long one.

In the part before the drop it seems like you are choosing to have it be mostly different column patterns with some same column anchors and jacks. I do like this idea however right now it lacks some consistency. I also feel like Improvements to this concept can be made if you apply pitch relevancy to this.

Examples of inconsistency:
21586|4,21586|2,21923|1 , after a jump on piano emphasis you create a jack but this one 21586|2,21923|1 does not do that. while the others like
26979|1,27316|1 and 32372|1,32709|1 do apply this jack.

Applying the concept that you set up of 29001|4,29338|4,29675|4 , 23608|4,23945|4,24282|4 being 3 anchors you should apply this as well to 66754|4,67091|4,67428|3

That is what you would have to fix. Now on to my suggested change to this patterning. Right now your jack/anchor layering is mostly relevant to the location in the music and not much to the pitch. while in the music currently there are multiple same pitch notes after each other. for example 23608|4,23945|4 , 29001|4,29338|4 , 33720|4,34057|3,34395|4 , 36080|1,36417|3 etc. If you would change the patterning around to make the anchors be on these specific pitch relevant jacks it would represent the music much better.
Here is an example of how that would look like, https://medal.tv/games/quaver/clips/vMWoZMzBbL7JL/d1337BJVslIi?invite=cr-MSx6ZEgsMjI2OTI3NjAs

This suggestion/issue ofc repeats itself for similar parts


Campingscrub
Creator
over 1 year ago

You are totally right about the pattern, I changed the corresponding patterns to what you had in mind, your video was a big help tysm