Chaser
Susumu Hirasawa
Source:
Paprika
Tags:
追う者 Ou Mono Paprika パプリカ Papurika Anime Movie WMG SME Milan Records Japanese Novel Madhouse TESLAKITE Electronic Progressive Rock Symphonic
BPM:
134
Length:
2:56
Passes/Fails:
91 / 58
This is literally the chorus of the song and it seems to be wayy too under-represented.. I strongly don't agree on this one
To me this is just an instrumental transition, and the most important parts are the two chorus with the voice at 0:55 and 2:10
This could use some nice minijack expression for the vocals, and it will transition more fluidly into the next section where you only mapped the vocals
Is this section copypasta? up to here? 98303
Yes the music repeats
This whole section have the stream sound, like how you did it in the beginning
Same answer as below
I think there can be a minijack here
I believe these will be better if they transition into a different hand so it will represent the transition better
58900|3,58900|4,59012|3
I really like it this way, but i guess i need to make sacrifices
Also want to mention this one handed jack because it feels pretty out of the blue and unnecessary because there doesn't seem to be a strong sound here to follow it
From this section onwards I dont understand why you threw away your jack concept and placed jumpstream? The placements dont seem to be following anything solid either and I see a lot of inconsistencies so I strongly suggest you give this section a second thought
Up to here : 51736
In the background you can hear confused voices that make this part of the song stand apart from the rest, also calming it because it's clouding everything. So I went with the music and changed patterns in a cloudy and unpredictable way
This has drum usage for each sound, so I believe it can use heavier patterns
That would minimize the vocals which is the main focus of the map
another repeating suggestion - doubles for this extra sound, go through the whole map as well if you agree
I originally preferred to ignore the flash sound, it completely breaks the flow when you're focused on the rhythm and vocals … but since it's loud enough i guess i have no choice
and yes doubles for drums - These keep repeating throughout the map so I wont post these here anymore, but if you agree you should go through the whole map and fix
See first answer for this one
I want to keep recommending triples for crashes because I believe it deserves emphasis compared to other drums
This section onwards seem very underthought, to me it seems like you are missing sounds that could have been represented to give this section some flavor. I also recommend using stronger structure if your intention was to keep it simple compared to the previous section
I'm just adding a break between all the jacks during this lighter moment of the music but i still kept some complexity. This is a very light stream following the melody and not much more needed
I'm just adding a break between all the jacks during this lighter moment of the music but i still kept some complexity. This is a very light stream following the melody and not much more needed
make triple cos of crash?
12333, 8751
same with these
make triple cos of crash?
+1 note like quaver://editor/8527
Stream sound here like you have represented before
14124|1,14348|1,14572|1 - Drums
14124|3,14236|2,14348|3,14460|4,14572|3 - Vocals
the drums dont seem to be emphasized here either, might feel inconsistent because you are going back and forth using doubles and singles
Vocals are already emphasized
Is there a reason for these being both doubles?
Vocals (lots of moments like this in the song as well)
Suggest adding a note here as well, same as the reason from quaver://editor/8527
seems like these are ignoring the drums?
Yes, I focused on the vocals and if I put doubles on the drums here it loses all meaning
I think this can be a double coz theres that extra sound here. Prolly nice to place on 4