in my opinion using 2 extra LNs for the slight pitch drop in the vocals is a bit extreme, especially considering how little long notes you have used so far. Release of the notes also does not match the song.
This long note should be extended as the sound does not end on the 1/4 snap. If the LN release followed by 1/8 burst is uncomfortable, notes can be rearranged.
unmapped sound
unmapped sound
extra note
unmapped sound
note 1/4 too late
mistimed note. 1/4 burst happens 1/2 beat later
burst is mistimed. All notes should be on 1/4s
208622|1,208662|2,208702|3 same
209579|4,209619|3,209659|1
Extra note
Extra note. Long vocal instead of 2 short
LN starts 1/8 too late
note missing
note missing
All of these notes are mistimed by 1/4
All of these notes are mistimed by 1/4
Missing sound.
The "missing note" thing continues forward from here. Check all instances.
Missing sound. Pattern ends too early.
Missing sound. Pattern ends too early.
Unmapped sound. Long note is irrelevant.
Unmapped sound
The long note should be timed to start on the next beat
Unmapped sound
There is an unmapped sound after this long note on the next 1/1 beat
in my opinion using 2 extra LNs for the slight pitch drop in the vocals is a bit extreme, especially considering how little long notes you have used so far. Release of the notes also does not match the song.
This long note should be extended as the sound does not end on the 1/4 snap. If the LN release followed by 1/8 burst is uncomfortable, notes can be rearranged.
Song representation is not consistent with whats coming up next. All similar fast vocals are 2 note jacks.