Missing jump
Added jump on col 3&4, moved the following note to col 1
how about re-arranging the following notes to a trill for the snare kick something like https://i.imgur.com/YyFeOHv.jpg . this may require some further re-arranging of the following streams
Added the trill on col 1&3, adjusted streams afterwards to prevent awkwardness
This should be a hand since 64000 and 69333 are also hands
missing note for kick
note added!
hand here, due to how you layered prev parts
sounds quieter, maybe jump is fine here
I think this repeats so check the part after for same suggestion
A similar idea happens at 04:15.667, so applied the change there
note you might wanna represent
Done! Sidenote, surrounding pattern needed an adjustment to accommodate the drum
change to a hand, followed with 233833|4 to a jump, also fix 234000|2,234000|3 234166|2,234166|4 234333|4,234333|2,234333|3 layering
This section was kinda a mess in general with layering, adjusted notes to fix that
just a jump is fine
can be a 1/8th burst
Considered sticking with the original pattern (bursts to represent the melody's chip bursts? idk a proper term haha)
But the breakish drums are significant enough for bursts to be added. Done!
burst is not as intense as the part before (88000|3,88000|4,88041|1,88083|2,88125|4,88166|1), so maybe remove it
Done!
Missing jump
Added jump on col 3&4, moved the following note to col 1
how about re-arranging the following notes to a trill for the snare kick something like https://i.imgur.com/YyFeOHv.jpg . this may require some further re-arranging of the following streams
Added the trill on col 1&3, adjusted streams afterwards to prevent awkwardness
This should be a hand since 64000 and 69333 are also hands
missing note for kick
note added!
hand here, due to how you layered prev parts
sounds quieter, maybe jump is fine here
I think this repeats so check the part after for same suggestion
A similar idea happens at 04:15.667, so applied the change there
note you might wanna represent
Done! Sidenote, surrounding pattern needed an adjustment to accommodate the drum
change to a hand, followed with 233833|4 to a jump, also fix 234000|2,234000|3 234166|2,234166|4 234333|4,234333|2,234333|3 layering
This section was kinda a mess in general with layering, adjusted notes to fix that
just a jump is fine
can be a 1/8th burst
Considered sticking with the original pattern (bursts to represent the melody's chip bursts? idk a proper term haha)
But the breakish drums are significant enough for bursts to be added. Done!
burst is not as intense as the part before (88000|3,88000|4,88041|1,88083|2,88125|4,88166|1), so maybe remove it
Done!