Role-Playing Game (Cut Ver.)
SoraMafuUraSaka
Source:
n/a
Tags:
RPG, そらまふうらさか, jpop, j-pop, electronic, hybrid, jumpstream, japanese, 日本語, soraru, mafumafu, uratanuki, aho no sakata, pop'n, ddr a, dancedancerevoloution a, jubeat clan, pop'n music, うさぎと猫と少年の夢, Fernando XIII [13], jacks
BPM:
162
Length:
1:44
Passes/Fails:
3 / 4
delete this note to stay consistent with the RPG vocal dump you did at times like 93223|2,93223|1,93284|3,93346|4
this note should be a jump for the kick and to stay consistent with all similar dump like 95074|4,95074|1,95136|3,95198|2,95260|1 and 99149|2,99149|1,99210|3,99272|4
missing note here, even if it's on purpose it's still not justified as there's no apparent reason for it
'it' being the pause
this pattern is also awkward and can be easily fixed by simply mirroring these notes 75630|3,75723|2
hope i understood that right
this pattern plays very awkwardly/badly and doesn't fit the song at all. try continuing the jumpstream normally, something like this
81186|4,81278|3,81371|2,81371|4,81463|1,81556|2,81649|3,81741|2,81741|4,81834|3,81926|2,82019|1,82112|3,82112|4 same thing for the copy paste later on
you didn't change the copy paste later on (reply timestamp)
im an idiot i changed the bar right before it
should be a jump for clap + melody
21000|3 / 26186|4 / 26926|3 / 32112|4 / 32852|1 / 38037|1 / 38778|4 same thing, even if you're ignoring the claps to put more focus on the vocals and melody alone it still is weird and i heavily advice against doing that