starlights feat. TEA (you Remix)
kamome sano
Source:
Altair
Tags:
long note, ln, electronic, J-Pop, サノカモメ
BPM:
174
Length:
4:45
Passes/Fails:
703 / 2343
In my opinion you can do more with this part - particularly the pitch of the synth is something you can look into. In my mind I have smth like this:
1/2:
2/2:
Syllable thing with vocal - so LN should be splitted into 2 -> one at 149835 and the other at 150007
Nevermind. Ignore this I misheard it
moving to red line seems more accurate
Same with 7K I'd say
Would suggest not ignoring the percussion here and add a note (preferably on 4)
Also same for 7K
better consistency as LN for the vocal
wait actually nevermind this. I just understand the intention. You can just ignore this
In my opinion, this one hand trill causes hand balance to be very right heavy.
(Also at 71041|4,71127|3,71214|4,71300|3,71386|4,71472|3,71558|4,71645|3,71731|4,71817|3,71903|4,71989|3,72076|4)
So I suggest changing them to something along the lines of how I rearrange below:
For 70265:
For 71041:
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Uhhhh
Second pic broke so here it is again
for 71041:
Move these to 2nd column to prevent strains and to distinguish these kicks above from the snares sounds at 68972|1,69145|1
It's better consistency wise to make one of the notes here a short LN like 65007|4 for the bell
143800 as well
I'd suggest for handbalance to move these whole thing one column to the left
These should be short LNs like 13627|3 etc. The reason being that the sounds starts to be louder here + at 15869 - you lengthen the LN 4 beats before the next vocal phrase (16904).
That means this one (the 13110 one) should do the same
Recommending making these vocals as a transition part + consistency with the next part.