In my opinion, this one hand trill causes hand balance to be very right heavy. (Also at 71041|4,71127|3,71214|4,71300|3,71386|4,71472|3,71558|4,71645|3,71731|4,71817|3,71903|4,71989|3,72076|4)
So I suggest changing them to something along the lines of how I rearrange below:
For 70265:
For 71041: https://i.imgur.com/7UnWLVc.png alt="go to https://i.imgur.com/7UnWLVc.png" width="600">
Uhhhh
Second pic broke so here it is again
for 71041:
Recommending making these vocals as a transition part + consistency with the next part.
I'd suggest for handbalance to move these whole thing one column to the left
It's better consistency wise to make one of the notes here a short LN like 65007|4 for the bell
143800 as well
Move these to 2nd column to prevent strains and to distinguish these kicks above from the snares sounds at 68972|1,69145|1
These should be short LNs like 13627|3 etc. The reason being that the sounds starts to be louder here + at 15869 - you lengthen the LN 4 beats before the next vocal phrase (16904).
That means this one (the 13110 one) should do the same
moving to red line seems more accurate
Same with 7K I'd say
Would suggest not ignoring the percussion here and add a note (preferably on 4)
Also same for 7K
In my opinion you can do more with this part - particularly the pitch of the synth is something you can look into. In my mind I have smth like this:
1/2:
2/2:
better consistency as LN for the vocal
wait actually nevermind this. I just understand the intention. You can just ignore this
Syllable thing with vocal - so LN should be splitted into 2 -> one at 149835 and the other at 150007
Nevermind. Ignore this I misheard it
In my opinion, this one hand trill causes hand balance to be very right heavy.
(Also at 71041|4,71127|3,71214|4,71300|3,71386|4,71472|3,71558|4,71645|3,71731|4,71817|3,71903|4,71989|3,72076|4)
So I suggest changing them to something along the lines of how I rearrange below:
For 70265:
For 71041:
https://i.imgur.com/7UnWLVc.png alt="go to https://i.imgur.com/7UnWLVc.png" width="600">
Uhhhh
Second pic broke so here it is again
for 71041:
Recommending making these vocals as a transition part + consistency with the next part.
I'd suggest for handbalance to move these whole thing one column to the left
It's better consistency wise to make one of the notes here a short LN like 65007|4 for the bell
143800 as well
Move these to 2nd column to prevent strains and to distinguish these kicks above from the snares sounds at 68972|1,69145|1
These should be short LNs like 13627|3 etc. The reason being that the sounds starts to be louder here + at 15869 - you lengthen the LN 4 beats before the next vocal phrase (16904).
That means this one (the 13110 one) should do the same
moving to red line seems more accurate
Same with 7K I'd say
Would suggest not ignoring the percussion here and add a note (preferably on 4)
Also same for 7K
In my opinion you can do more with this part - particularly the pitch of the synth is something you can look into. In my mind I have smth like this:
1/2:
2/2:
better consistency as LN for the vocal
wait actually nevermind this. I just understand the intention. You can just ignore this
Syllable thing with vocal - so LN should be splitted into 2 -> one at 149835 and the other at 150007
Nevermind. Ignore this I misheard it