Ragnarok
Gram vs. Camellia
Source:
The Requiem
Tags:
electronic instrumental kamelcamellia cametek Speedcore Classical Psy-Trance DJ Genki Masaya Oya かめりあ 大箭将也
BPM:
106
Length:
5:25
Passes/Fails:
1858 / 5387
i don't think these kind of sound are on 1/3 because they are clearly on 1/4, they should be like this. also check again in the other places like this
SVs dont flow well at all imo
overall map is kinda SPICY, a lot of patterns feel very strange / unbalanced and they overall just look not that good sometimes (played with NLN)
if you wish to rank it go ahead, but I think it might be better to drop this and think about it again in a few months so you can improve the patterns to be a lot more enjoyable on some parts
dont take it as an insult, just my honest opinion
I think this map is fine. And why should you play with NLN but this map only has very very light LN? Also what SV are you pointing at?
note snaps are still kinda weird, something like this would work better
missnapped
due to the frequent usage of timing points for more accurate timings, some timing/measure/bpm line weirdness goes on in the map, and this is one example
making use of the option in the timing point editor to hide a certain timing point's lines, please hide some of the lines introduced with the timing points so that it doesn't look as messy
ideally there would be one line every measure, but as long as it looks "natural" it's fine
actually there's also some incorrect beat snap coloring as well, if you wanna try fixing it you can try using the plugin I made exactly for this purpose
alternatively dm me on discord and I'll just fix it for you, since it's kind of a pain to explain
notes here are snapped weirdly
section here should be 1/3 and/or 1/6
move album name from tags to source
try something like this instead
rearrange the chords in this section so that the hands are always jacks in their columns
so for example these hands should both be [124]
I'd also try to make it so that jumps only share one column with adjacent hands
so for example the first five chords might be [124][124][13][234][234]
pattern rhythm isn't accurate but i do like it
move earlier 1/4 beat
three notes
could maybe vary the chordjack rhythm a bit by incorporating the melodic rhythm
section should be made more interesting
instead of having constant 1/2 jumps, try mapping the jumps to the melody
263250
making this section all ln seems unnecessary to me
311455
should be mapped to 1/3 instead
175045
177096|4,177096|3,177160|2,177224|4,177288|3,177352|2,177416|1,177481|3,177545|4,177609|3,177673|2,177737|1,177801|2,177865|3,177865|4,177929|2,177929|1,177993|3,177993|4,178058|2,178058|1,178122|4,178122|3,178207|1,178293|2,178378|4,178464|3,178549|1,178634|2 sounds to me this section is 1/6
chordjacks could potentially be replaced with something more interesting
maybe a more dumpy stream pattern
170943
missnapped?
shouldn't these be lns to be consistent with before?
112994
align ln end with the others
291711|4
313506|1,313506|4
It's the same as this, so it shouldn't be a 1/3 LN stream.
This long note can be made similarly.
https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/56994/mods#mod_5670
Follow the drums so double
https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/56994/mods#mod_5670
https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/56994/mods#mod_5666
All of these are ambiguous.
In fact, a lot is missing in other parts, and some are less expressive.
I think it would be better if the note was single.
https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/56994/mods#mod_5670
no. it is 'Suggestion' not issue
and 3:10.429~3:11.391 same
aplied
153634|4,153634|2,153699|3,153891|3,153891|1,153955|2
It should be the same as these.
The sound here is relatively small, so it's okay to express it simple.
but 2:19.916~2:20.942 It sounds very similar to the melody here.
I think the same thing is better.
It would be cool if the LN of the mod below was applied here as well.
100622|4,100686|3
The two melodies are similar, so it would be more fun if they were similar.
1:37.096~1:37.865
Differentiation of these parts will be necessary.
No strong drum, so this should be a single.
It needs to be differentiated from the jumps just below.
can i just make it jumptrill